Red Mansion: from Champion to King of Different Surnames.

The whole book is full of a sense of fragmentation! The protagonist's personality, behavior, characters, plot, events, etc.! It's not like a complete, coherent novel! It's more like the author just forcibly spliced ​​it together when he thought of it without an outline!

I admire the author for making Mrs. Wang look like a crazy person. She scolds the protagonist when she sees her, and then the protagonist thinks it doesn't matter. A housewife scolds the little beast when she sees the champion, and then nothing happens. I really admire the author's way of thinking.

Yakumo Purple talks a lot, regardless of the occasion or situation, trying to keep others from getting off the stage. The same goes for the male protagonist. If he is so tolerant, why is he tolerant? You say you are the lord of the world, but others keep talking about you over and over again, and you still don't care? Is it difficult to teach her a lesson and make her pay attention when she speaks? Anyway, I'm annoyed by this kind of thing. It's like how familiar he is. He does things regardless of his heart. If there's any problem with what the male protagonist does, he just sticks to him when he's fine. It doesn't mean that you have to make others respect you. Can't you speak normally? **Friends chat and gossip casually, but if there are other people nearby, why do they just put it aside to demolish others? Lost your brain?

Why are we talking about a celebrity again? It's that Reba guy again. It's really annoying and it greatly affects the reading experience.

After reading a few chapters, I feel like it's a bad book. Why don't you tell me about the plot? Why don't you write a systematic text without first establishing rules? The triggering condition of the sign-in system is to say nothing, whether it is by day, month, year, location, or by main character. If there are no rules, the most likely thing to happen is that the system will disappear after writing it.

Later, Mao always wrote Xiang Yu's bravery, Tianlong's halberd Wuyama and so on. Shouldn't it be written Lu Bu's bravery, Fang Tian's painted halberd, red rabbit horse, and precious eagle bow?

There is a bit too much nonsense. The number of words in a chapter is already small, and there is not much useful information.

There are so many chapters on this matter of the Sheng family, and the appearance of eating is a bit ugly.

Not to mention anything else, let's just say that a marquis married the daughter of a fifth-rank official, and she was not the legitimate daughter. What do you think, author? Do you want the protagonist to be a loner? There were so many rules in ancient times, but such a powerful Marquis? And when you write a novel, don't you check it? A ** marquis taking orders from a count? It's embarrassing, okay?

Not bad, as long as he doesn't look like Paul

The recent comprehensive novels have been well stitched together

Now that I'm married, I should write more about Xing Han's plot. Isn't Xiao Yuanyi not good enough? Also, the update speed is too slow. Please update more. I can't read it and it's just like half of it. . . . . .

The highest praise from Chinese people: This dish really goes well with rice

The eunuch will be released tonight. Everyone applauds.

Does it mean to collect a harem and change the world before all the women stay alone in empty houses until they grow old?

Lexe, let's find a factory, right?

Can the protagonist's character be changed? Aren't Saiyans a cold-blooded person?

Can't write anymore? Still sent the wrong chapter!

Is 666 open? Paragraph divisions are gone. Pay money to see it. There are only five pages in one page.

No matter which way you choose, the rewards will be the same, which is nice.

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Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

It was originally fine, but why not get a Chaos Body? Your cultivation methods are all different, and you still need individual bloodlines. Won't the meridians change? After all, the races have changed

The author writes very well, keep up the good work

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