The Boy 2: My Sweet Girlfriend, Lin Miaomiao

I have read several copies of Pi 2. The protagonist has multiple identities, which made me suffer from embarrassment. I started with a business boss, and I studied this one, and then that one. This kind of all-around type is really easy to perform, so why not write it well and become an investment genius from scratch? It will be fine with the help of the system.

Tiantian Lin Miaomiao, does it look good? Blindness?

Now Li Shaoyan, now Lin Tian, ​​now Lin Miaomiao, now Lin Miaomiao, now Qiao Yingzi, but they are just two people, it is obvious that the conversation between the two people suddenly changed their names.

The introduction blew me away, and the comment section killed my last hope.

I can't even count the number of typos

The progress of the male and female protagonists is too slow. Every three chapters have to be replaced by one chapter. And what's the point of playing with plots that slap people in the face all the time? I read about a hundred of them and I was really sick. They were all typos and I didn't change them even though I said I wanted to. Basically in every chapter, the names of the male and female protagonists will keep changing.

The villain line is buried too long. The good guy knows that the bad guy is going to harm people. He won't appear until twenty or thirty chapters later. Looking at the sweet pet, he still has to worry about this.

I can't bear the delay of not being together**

It's better to keep raising them, but don't die.

Why do the names of Fang Yifan and Qiao Yingzi always appear? Did you go to this little joy during the break?