Hong Kong Movie: Rebirth of Azu! Start with the Immortal Thief in Liuku!

The ceiling of humanity at the beginning. In the first battle, he was stabbed dozens of times and his hair turned gray. He was a poisonous bunch.

Is this all the incredible scientific research? Only copy but not create? Symbiote used to possess? The research is so low-level that you can't even control the symbiote absolutely, let alone use symbiote-derived technology.

Why are there so many people running to play with evil gods? What system, what time travel, you are just a clown in an immersive dream

The protagonist has already single-handedly killed the general. Smoothie's original words were that it would be impossible to kill him if he is admired before he has grown up. If he single-handedly kills the general, he is said to have not grown up. You write without considering logic. Don't the characters have brains?

A mute. The main character is written very badly. Like shit. The author wanted to highlight the power of the Liuku Immortal Thief, but ended up shooting it in the foot. Guan Zu's ability in the movie is not weak. To the author he is worse than a gangster. You can really tell the author's level in just a few chapters.

I don't have a good impression of Zhang Chongbang, so what's the point of having a sense of justice? Later, I ordered him to defuse a bomb and shoot one of his own people. After being investigated and questioned by a bunch of colleagues and superiors, didn't he just accept it with peace of mind? According to Qiu Gangao, you can't help a thief but your own brothers.

Azu, stop it, the plane is full of Jackie Chan! ! ! !

Without the protagonist, Dragon Kingdom wouldn't even be on the rankings. Why should Dragon Kingdom be so low? The other four people are not ordinary people. According to the way you write it, these four people are just **** and useless.

People who can read novels are very receptive. You can make the protagonist very magical and mysterious. But the basic settings cannot accept random logic. Where did the smartphones and apps come from in the 1980s?

The idea is a good idea, but it's a pity that I don't have the ability to write this idea well. Maybe the so-called positive energy is a bit superficial and looks awkward.

In the 1980s, there were bb machines and mobile phones, and here there were mobile phones, live broadcasts, and Internet cafes... I don't know what to say, the author.

Very**. Positive energy system. Retreat immediately as soon as it appears, poison. Positive energy**

A magician who doesn't know magic actually learns ninjutsu? So Nightbringer = Magician?

Is it really okay to kill the villain after saving him? You are still a doctor, and there is no airtight wall in the world, not to mention how many eyes are on the doctor who can bring the dead back to life and regenerate severed limbs. Except for Yun Zhonghe, there is really no need to kill ordinary villains like Ye Erniang

Why do more and more villains appear one after another? The next one comes out before one is killed. It is better to kill one first and then the next one. It looks too confusing when you write it this way.

The cover picture is the picture on my bed sheet. It looks good, but placing this picture on the bed sheet requires a lot of control. . .

I just started watching it, and I have a question, will the Bible Loli God appear in the sequel? I was a little speechless. When I first read the title, I thought I was accepting a Bible loli from Devil High School.

Twenty-eight, in the last paragraph, I am Linghua's*, didn't Bao Bao say it? Why did Jackie Chan say it or did he say the author's whole life? Suddenly the clouds started to rise, and it felt like I was being fed shit.

Good guy, are you taking stock? The whole person is saying one sentence. Your Scorpion King didn't even show his face, and it felt like he was passed over in just two sentences. If anyone could stand to watch this, it would be so boring.

I haven't read it yet, just read the introduction. But I still want to comment that strong men do not break the law. Of course you can see this on TikTok. O(o?`з?? O)?

The dialogue between the characters is too unnatural and too pretentious.

Ningguang is indeed rich, but the author writes that he will always pay 600 million in compensation, entrust a deposit of 10 billion, and then give 50 billion after the event is completed. Is this a bit too much? Is inflation in Teyvat so serious?

Tianxiu author, completely paste and copy

Oh my gosh, the pink Larulus hearts are so cute.

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