AFK in the Heavens' Dungeons: Getting the Fallen Heart Flame from the Start
挂机诸天副本，开局获得陨落心炎
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
38Chapters
1.2MReads
484Flowers
10.0Score
More by this author
When People Are Calming Their Souls, I Can Summon All the Worlds
Entertainment: Worth Hundreds of Billions, Started by Bullying the Gods
Changed to a Fighter Class, and Started with a Comfortable Start.
One Year in the Holy Realm, Do You Call This an Ordinary Disciple?
The End Is Coming: Frozen Fruit at the Beginning
Cyberpunk: Gambit Saves Rebecca
Divine Simulation: After a Year as a Saint, I'm Invincible
Dragon Ball GT: My Super Saiyan 5 Crushes the God of Destruction from the Start
I Start a Life Simulator in a World of Film and Television
Global Class Change: The Enhancer Is the Weakest Class!
Readers also read
Global Creation: From the Start, I Had a God Simulator!
Humanity’s Sacrifice: Goddess of Life, Show Some Respect
I Am a Primordial Weasel Spirit, Asking Nuwa to Grant Me a Title!
Global Login: I'm the Only One Who Chooses the Honghuang World
The Magic Card Era: My Cards Can Level Up Without Limit!
The Fourth Calamity: This Game Is Way Too Realistic
Reader comments 6
Translated by Google Translate
When the villain loses to the protagonist and is about to be killed, he asks the protagonist to tell him some secret, and then the protagonist spares his life. However, after the protagonist agrees, the villain kills the protagonist with a backhand. This kind of unfaithful protagonist makes me feel so poisonous after seeing it too many times. Either he won't agree or he won't speak, which is fine. But he will kill him after he agrees. It's really **
The main problem is the wording, and the problematic areas are not just one or two, but so many that it's so confusing... The wording in many places would not be done like this by anyone with even a little common sense in writing. A typical place is like "If you are in other places, you will easily be attacked by thousands of people, and you will be in a precarious situation, and you will always be in a dangerous situation." The previous one talked about the safety of the sect, otherwise it means that you are in other places, so I repeat it here. In the same way, the precariousness and constant danger are repeated later. There is also this sentence: "Even the creatures in the world can be summoned by it." The two words "Yu" are not only cumbersome but also cause grammatical errors, not to mention that the statement "summoned by it" is outrageous. You can even summon the creatures in the world you live in, you can even make a contract with the creatures in the world you live in and summon them... This is what the world says...
Not exciting at all, just mediocre
It was broken off in ** years. . Not even 300,000 words, no desire to read it
Commentary on Chapter 1: Hanging Up the Dungeon of All Heavens and Getting the Fallen Heart Flame at the Start written by Renjian Chiyue.
About Chapter 5 of "Hang the Dungeon of All Heavens and Obtain Fallen Heart Flame at the Start" written by Chi Yue in the Human World: Beasts, get out and die! Chapter review.