In Genshin Impact: I Serve as One of Liyue's Qixing

I saw Chapter 50 and it was too watery. It was all about various explanations, and the plot of the Salt God was poorly written.

Really, this is purely affecting my performance. I have no choice. Since the Shitu is restricted, I can only ensure that I have enough control over the hanging pictures. If I am robbing, everyone who looks at the pictures will hand over the flowers to me! Doge

Not to mention the character of the protagonist, eight-tenths of a chapter are settings, and they are not discussed in the first few chapters, but in every chapter. I just watched a little progress of the story and got a little more into it. Suddenly there are a lot of settings, which makes people tired.

There are a lot of descriptions of miscellaneous things

How can I put it this way? What can be said in more than ten chapters has been accomplished in seventy chapters, and it doesn't feel like reading a novel. It just feels like reading an article alone and then retelling it to you.

I don't understand what the author wanted to write. . . Keep talking to yourself

Are you happy? It's written like a mosaic

The author of Lettuce** has never played it? How much mola is an omelette? If you eat more than 1,000 yuan a month and add sand, the protagonist will have to starve to death, and the sleepy guy will have to pay 200,000. A month for the protagonist and this little soldier, it will cost at least 30,000 to 50,000 to survive starvation. You are missing a zero, right?

Crazy Water, Luo Liba is so arrogant, *, a few chapters are all dialogues

Half of the ten chapters are settings. What do you think?