I Run a Pokemon Day Care in the Real World

Can you put double quotes in character dialogue? If you don't put double quotes, do you think it's inner dialogue or is the narrator talking?

To be honest, I can watch it, but I always have to write some embarrassing plots every once in a while. Do you think what you wrote is funny? I just found it very stiff.

Adoption is a bit bad; also, many of the jokes are awkward and fail to produce funny effects, which is counterproductive.

To be honest, millions of civilians can't afford this kind of elves. It's all a game for the rich.

Isn't Song Yuyue and Jiang Lingfeng childhood sweethearts? Moreover, they were so close in the beginning, and both families accepted it by default. However, after meeting the protagonist, they immediately fell in love with each other. This is very sexy!

Isn't Zeraora also a fantasy Pokémon?

The segmentation is too poor, the dialogue is too long, and there are too many words in each paragraph, which greatly affects the viewing experience.

To be honest, I don't know why I hate the woman named Song? It seemed like he was annoyed because he knew how to dissect the things he was curious about.

Your writing is good, but there is a problem with the segmentation. I feel really uncomfortable when I read it, and I can't read it. Also, if you can keep writing and change the segmentation, I can pay to read it, but I won't read it if you are an eunuch.

I feel like Zhao Yaqian is good as the heroine