Shot Dead by My Girlfriend, I Choose to Bring the Paranormal into the World!

The pace is too slow, too draggy. The plot is too watery. Example. I eat. I have breakfast. I had a meal in the morning. I had rice bowl in the morning. I eat shredded pork rice in the morning. I eat green pepper shredded pork rice bowl in the morning. TM, so far, the latest chapters have this meaning. He has been emphasizing killing Su, this woman. As a result, I just won't kill. I want to put it on the shelf and kill it. Go to hell with your legs.

Become a eunuch! I already guessed it. This book is absolutely eunuch. The plot was originally weak but the protagonist was not decisive enough!

I hope that woman will die within chapter 10, thank you

If you want to see that woman die, you don't need to read. According to the author's speed, she will not die before it is released. The male protagonist's revenge is to give hope again and again and then destroy it, so the woman will not die for a while.

The more you grind, the less readers will want to read it, and the less they don't want to see it, the worse your grades will be. I don't understand that you know how to write and readers will like it, but you just grind it off.

The protagonist is mentally ill, so he can just kill people. It's a lot of nonsense.

No wonder I know how to be a eunuch, eunuchs are right, *, to describe a Bichi like this, it is not allowed by the sword, so don't write if you don't know how to write, *, the whole world is dark, I am the only light, *, this Bichi is not too Bichi, although the world is very dark, but not everyone likes darkness, ** The author writes this, even the eunuch is sorry for the Bichi woman he described

Shen Nong has tasted it, and it has no gourmet taste. According to my judgment! This book is poisonous. The whole text is grinding and chirping, just like watching the waves of the sea, full of water. In addition, there are also other small poisonous spots that are densely packed. Not much to say, I believe even old bookworms can see it. Newbies can try chasing books, and feel free to engage in prostitution for free. After all, you are the one who feels uncomfortable. The technique is to use fragments of chapters to create suspense. Unfortunately, the writing is not very good, and this chapter fragmentation technique suddenly turns into a sea. The above is Shennong's subjective evaluation, which is water poisoning. Objective evaluation: non-toxic, a good book worth experiencing.

Kill that woman quickly. Author, everyone is waiting for you to kill that woman. One thing to say, I don't know why this woman is so stupid. The first time she killed the male protagonist, she did it because he felt free to let his back go to her. The second time I want to use the killer hero who can predict the future, I don't really think that no one has any countermeasures. One thing to say, it's so stupid. Relying only on external objects and not using your own brain.

It's so annoying. It's very uncomfortable to see. It's just annoying.