From the Konoha Sannin, Take a Look at the Weird Nicknames from the Manga!

It's about demon slayer again. I'll get disgusted after watching it too much.

One thing to say, if you really want to take stock of this kind of nickname, you don't have to search for it from all over the world, just put Genshin Impact on it. The mere top ten list is really not enough for Genshin Impact to fill your teeth.

The world of Naruto was shocked when I saw it Shocked to see super beast armed I was shocked when I saw a bald head punched

The writing is very average, and the content that was rewritten when playing the video is not written. There is a lot of nonsense that should not be written, such as the section between Jiraiya and Pain. It would be better if you add Jiraiya's final confession than the author's own nonsense. In short, this book has too much nonsense and little practical content. The author also added his own confession, which is not worth reading.

I'm already angry. Why can't I dream? I don't accept it.

The way of science fiction, make me laugh

One thing I don't understand is that the protagonist doesn't owe Yang any money at all. The money he owes is expenses, it's contracted, and it's not borrowed money. Why should he give him 2 million coins? I don't understand. I won't talk about it later. I don't feel anything else. Mainly because I don't understand it.

After reading everyone's comments, I can only say that what you said is right, but is there a possibility that this book has actually collapsed in the vest area. . At that time, I quickly revised it and ended it in a hurry, but the follow-up outline immediately collapsed. As a result, I just had to bite the bullet and write. The more I wrote, the less I knew how to write later. The original foreshadowing can no longer be continued. If a new line is started without foreshadowing, a lot of people will run away. If the foreshadowing is restarted and there is no content, people will not like to read it, so the story can only be pushed forward forcefully. The repetitive routine at the beginning was okay if I used it once or twice, but I found it boring when I used it too much, so I could only think of starting in another direction. Now it seems not ideal, and I am confused now as I write. I don't know where to start from. How about finishing CLAND next and then finishing it?

Author, if you see the Altfo Kingdom I mentioned before, if you can get it out, I can give you a reward plus a few hundred points converted into flowers. Of course, if you agree, it's okay. If you don't agree, I'll forget it. I'm not Yang Hei and I won't force you to agree. But regardless of whether you agree or not, can you give me a reply to make it clear? After all, most people don't like the feeling of waiting.

The scene where Fujitora sees Luffy off can be shown

Who is next, everyone? The manuscript I have saved here has reached the third character, and I would like to ask for your opinions.

In the first chapter, I said I couldn't hear the protagonist's voice, but in the fourth chapter, I could hear it again? Br

What kind of food are you eating? I want you to obey me.

The subject matter is okay but the muscles are all lumpy. Look at the elegant noble character of the **Liao Luo Zhen variety show, or the many children and blessings story of the variety show Su Yang, the pure villain, self-serving, ruthless, wise and not the Holy Mother. Just change it up. Your character design is much different than yours, so the subject matter is okay.

Are there any pick-up guys?

It's been a long time since I've read such a good book as "The Surgery in Feilu". Come on, I'll give you flowers and review votes!

Can you write a story about one person with a protagonist, and you can get whatever you want with a monthly ticket for appreciating flowers?

You're so *too* embarrassing. To catch ghosts, you have to match your sword... It's true.

The merits are cleared? What the hell setting?

I was so confused that I even worked for others. It's okay to live a carefree life on your own, instead of working for someone else.

Why didn't any of the beauties that I swallowed be confiscated?

This book is good, but can Zhu Bajie be replaced by Sun Wukong? After all, he has been suppressed by Tathagata for five hundred years.

Why can't Alu eat more even if the protagonist wins if he can't eat it?

In one frame, if you pull out all the worlds and water them, the experience will be basically zero, because it is too fragmented.

Author, in Chapter 29, Feng Chu's words Onii-chan really pissed me off. Don't you know that Onii-chan is the younger sister's name for her brother? The younger brother calls her brother by the name Nisan. It's very **** when the younger brother calls her brother Onii-chan.

If you hadn't told me, I wouldn't have been able to find it.

Sealing the Demon has the power of all knights

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I don't understand why you have to shout out your name when performing ninjutsu. Doesn't this give the enemy time to react?

Author, I think you should rewrite it. The Zanpakutō swastika will originally increase the spiritual pressure by 510 times, so the protagonist's Zanpakutō is of no use at all. Zaraki cannot be completely defeated without swastika, and Aizen can only be defeated. Is Zanpakutō stronger than Aizen? , The combat power is too broken