Anime Crossover Slice of Life: Mystery Begins in Everyday Life

●For now, I don't think there's anything wrong with the plot. Except for the name, I think it's a bit bad. You've traveled to Japan, so why can't you give it a Japanese name? And falling to the sky is not as good as falling from the sky! Add a surname in front of it, such as Kamiya, Haze River and so on! ●It's enough to write four or five worlds at once. Don't touch the other ones until they are completely conquered. Just show up occasionally. For example, you can see them when you are conquering them or on a date. ●Can you add a dragon maid? ●Finally, I hope that the world where you can see girls and the part-time job devil is not written in a world where this is not the case in daily life! For example, aren't Thor's father and Quetzalcoatl the gods? Then set it up so that what they create is a mixture of visible girls, and the plot is moved to that world!

That's it, let's start raping the girl. It's one of the **** things that the protagonist of the manga must do.

Brother author, let's arrange some arrangements for the male protagonist of The Shape of Sound. Xiaoyue is a real BT. This kind of person can actually be the male protagonist. Good guy, this is a childhood nightmare, right? I really hate Xin. He bullied me the most when I was a child. When I grow up, I feel guilty. Is it the cat crying over the mouse again? I think letting the victim see you is hurting her. It's like a childhood shadow, and it actually has the nerve to ask for forgiveness! After watching it, my blood pressure was so high, it was outrageous, and I felt sorry for Glass. Sure enough, he was here to hurt others again.

●The most important thing is that I am a very defensive person. I hope that women related to the protagonist will not have physical contact with any men! Remember, it's anything! Including parents, brothers and other relatives! Even the elderly count! So not even male creatures! ●Hold hands, accidentally touch shoulders, etc., Even if there are clothes between them! Not even close contact! There is also something like smelling the heroine! In short, a little contact is extremely poisonous to me! Absolutely outrageous! ●Also, don't write about the heroine wearing a maid outfit so others can see the plot. The same goes for swimsuits and the like. For the beach plot, the venue will be reserved! Or just write "no one", it doesn't matter if it's reasonable or not, as long as no one sees it! ●That's all the requirements. As long as the author doesn't get beaten up, I will chase it to the end! Tickets and stuff will also be given out every month!

Mai Sakurajima is still in the swimsuit photo shoot as in the original novel. I don't even know where to go. Another book is gone.

Yukino's line is so embarrassing, couldn't you remove the "princess" part? Do you insist on the word water? I thought I would stop barking once my relationship developed, but now I still bark. From embarrassment to **, I'm really convinced.

After only reading a dozen chapters, the protagonist teases Jing Keai who is driving many times and fights with her. Don't you think it's dangerous? Who in the right mind would do this? After taking a picture with a mobile phone, he would regret having misunderstood the protagonist because he took the initiative to delete the female character? Isn't this still the protagonist's problem? After a class conflict with a classmate and a violent beating of a classmate, the teacher who has a good relationship with the protagonist goes directly to the class to publicly execute the protagonist. The whole process is complete. What kind of agreement should be made? Isn't it embarrassing in front of the whole class?

Author. Isn't the "princess" under Yukinoshita awkward? That's why the horse is called like this. Yukino accepted it as a matter of course. Do you really think you are a princess?

Author, what you write is very good, but I hope that when you write, you will not suddenly include the text that replaces Japanese pronunciation in a large paragraph. What Sou Ga, What Sou It's really uncomfortable, you know? Tell me, I have read so many books, and you are unique. If you want to write, just write it in Chinese. This is normal, but you suddenly added a Japanese pronunciation when writing. And it's also in Chinese characters. You will only give people a very abrupt and inexplicable feeling. It's okay if you know some Japanese, but if you don't know Japanese, you will see this thing. The speaking habits of Chinese and Japanese are different, so writing like this will only make people feel uncomfortable. It may be my personal problem, but I suggest you, the author, stop writing like this. From now on, just speak Chinese, and stop mixing in some Japanese sounds. And what you wrote is very good. I have already made up my mind. I hope you don't mind my personal opinion. And don't mess with young women's shoes

This novel only has more than a hundred chapters about Rose Girl, and the rest is very boring. The male protagonist is a pure Japanese Asashi, and the plot has no laughs and no climax.