I Open a Dungeon in the World of Comprehensive Martial Arts
我在综武；开地下城
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 544k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Novel Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
236Chapters
2.8MReads
73.6kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 50
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Do you really have an outline? It looks like a book written by a slap on the ass. Also, the upper limit of martial arts is higher than that of dungeons. It's a good time to step on a handful and play, don't play it next time. That's not how you blow it.
Using the DNF system, the Saint Seiya's strength is given to me, and I don't know where it is. It's so complicated. To be honest, author, can you control it? How many books have collapsed because of a few things from other worlds mixed in with them.
Even though the city was destroyed, there was no DNF. . .
The setting of the book is very novel and good, so it's boring not to show off the protagonist's exposure list. The reason why I came to read this book is because of the dungeon element. The interaction of martial arts characters is best closely related to the dungeon, surrounding the influence of the dungeon, rather than because of the change of the protagonist. You can improve the character of the protagonist, but don't steal the limelight. The other thing is to push the dungeon faster. It's more than 100 chapters and I'm still fighting goblins. I want to make more money. After all, he is also a martial arts character we like.
The writing is too big and the author cannot control it. Sooner or later it will collapse. The introduction takes up half of the content.
A typical street-fighting template, multi-faceted and complicated, I feel confused just writing about it.
A few random scribblings, a broken system setting introduction in three chapters, the Celestial Realm is only level 10, can't beat a Grimm, can't beat a monster with copper skin and iron bones? Don't you know that you are laughing so hard that your inner strength penetrates your whole body? Where are you showing off your IQ?
Chapters and chapters are all about introduction, or on the way to introduction...
How many did you write? Find a factory to work in
Can Ren Yingying be ranked in front of Shen Bijun? I've written a broken list again, and I won't mention the number of words, but I'm just messing around with it.