Transmigrating Between Two Worlds to Become a Merchant

Now it seems that this is a bad guy. Like other double wear products, they only sell them once or twice and then participate in the plot. . Simply poisonous

I seemed to have seen something, but also seemed to have seen nothing. When reading, it's like reading a text, going through it in your mind and then losing it.

The plot is so tight that it feels like a running novel.

The writing style is too stiff. You, the author, need to work harder on this aspect. Many things in your novel are not clearly explained.

The subject matter and introduction are very good, but the author's writing skills in question are slightly flawed, so please try your best~

The writing is too stiff. No emotion.

It's so compact. You come to modern times to buy things, and you go to the Republic of China to sell things. It's all like this. There's no plot. You don't spend any money. You just buy and sell every day. You don't do anything. **

The author is a novice, and he writes like a running account, with a lot of verbosity.

I can't wait for your update speed

How nice would it be to change this to first person?