Elf: at the Beginning, You Trick Serena into Becoming a Cook

Why did Lusamine have to have a lover when it could be written like this? OK. It's not like the couple whose works have left such an impression, they are more interesting together. But Lusamine let it go.

Throughout the generations of Pokémon, the girls who feel most comfortable accompanying the protagonist are Seimei, and the second one is Xiaoguang. Of course, my memory only stays in the Galar region, and I don't know what will happen in the future, so it's very wise for the author to start with Semei. Of course, for me, there are too many Pokémon heroines, at least dozens. Although I don't know how many the author can kill, but the key ones will be enough.

The Jia family gave a bride price of 40? ? Does anyone know how much the TV series pays?

It's really cool to have a little brother with you every day, from morning to night, from eating to going to the toilet, every day. The protagonist pretends to be a pig and a grandson every day, and he doesn't know why. Everyday life is super ordinary.

Why do wives have to be set in CN? I'm really confused. She's a wife, or a cn, so is she still a wife? Don't talk about reality. If someone attacks you personally, I'll just ask. And even if married women with children in reality must be non-c, it seems really awkward to have to add a CN setting in the novel. Even if the main character is a child they had together in time travel, at least it's a real wife. This is too fake.

Author, you must understand the meaning of revival and rise. We in China have always been on the path of rise rather than revival, because our civilization is still continuing.

The book you wrote, the author, is very good except for the identity. I think the identity of the protagonist you wrote is not very good. Shenlong must be written as a person with real abilities. It feels like the protagonist Jackie Chan's egg was born without any sense of excitement. On the contrary, it makes people impatient to continue reading.

How come the cooked noodles have color? Don't let them rise now, right?

Let's not talk about the combat power of the Ancient Holy Body. The endurance of the Ancient Kidney Body is no joke. The protagonist's harem is so huge, but his kidneys are still pretty good

Does the heroine have Touko? I like her very much.

Too much nonsense, too many first-person pronouns. Every sentence is full of thoughts and feelings. Isn't it very annoying to watch?

Reba is Princess Taiping. It's big there

The writing of the realm is so poor that it brings down the Mythical Da Luo. The Myth Da Luo only has the Myth Da Luo Celestial Immortal, but there is no such thing as the Golden Immortal. Basically refining Qi and transforming into God. The completion of this stage is the comparison with the realm of a saint.

那些幼稚装逼打脸的尴尬剧情，你写的时候不觉得尴尬，我看的时候可尴尬得紧啊

What do the numbers mean

About letting go of that Gardevoir "Complex: Lucifer's Teacher's Daily Life" Chapter 3: Sister Chapter Review.

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It's a failure to be exactly the same

Damn, I just updated and there was no news after a while.

About Chapter 2 of "Live Broadcast Challenge: Do You Really Want to Build a City" written by Wang Daxian'er? 180,000 Yuan for an elevator villa? (Please give me flowers and votes for the new book!) Chapter reviews.