
Big Voyage: Break into the Rocks Team at the Beginning
大航海:开局强闯洛克斯天团
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The protagonist must have eaten the Payne Fruit. The Gravity Fruit is really wasted. It's all Payne's abilities, not to mention the skill cooldown. You really can't copy it without using your brain, right?
Are you here to be funny? The fruit's ability is also cooling. What kind of gravity fruit are you talking about? As for what effect Pain's crude gravity application can have in the world of pirates, Naruto's strongest gravity repulsion skills are the Golden Wheel Reincarnation Explosion and the Silver Wheel Reincarnation Explosion. Just call it the Payne Fruit. What is it called the Gravity Fruit? You use the four basic forces of the universe like this.
Why are there so many two-armed people now? It's either a card or a cooldown. Is there something wrong with the author's mind?
Payne's skill is the Samsara Eye, and yours is a fruit ability. It's completely different. You can keep Payne's skill while also developing other abilities. Don't make it the same as the skill. It's too rigid. It's absolutely fine to wrap the gravitational repulsion around your body for close combat. You know the Great Shift of the Universe. The two forces pull and twist each other. And being able to manipulate gravity and repulsion means that you can change the direction of force. There are so many things that can be developed. Anyone who has taken a high school physics class can do it.
After all, you have nine years of compulsory education and have read so many cartoons and novels. You can play a Gravitation Fruit into a Penn Fruit, so you have to have some imagination. It's really boring. No matter what kind of writing is done, it will just copy the original owner's skills, which is very boring. Thunder, Anilu, Shaoshao Ace, no matter whether it suits your fighting style or not, just use it anyway, you are too lazy to think about it and still come up with good results, just kidding! I wish I could add skills directly to fruit illustrations like yours.
With his just-started physical fitness and the newly obtained fruit ability that requires five seconds to cool down, do you dare to say that he is invincible? Are your skills static? A person with several times the physique of an ordinary person can be invincible, but what about the world's most peak physique? Is the power the same? If it's the same, then why don't you continue to practice in the future? Not to mention the world with all kinds of strange abilities. The great swordsman's slashing range is surprisingly long. You may be killed without even knowing where the person is. There are also snipers like Beckman and Jesus Bu. With their knowledge and weapons, it's no problem to hit them for several kilometers, right? With Garp's physical skills, can you, Shinra Tenzheng, kill him? How far can you hit with one Shinra Tianzheng? A strong man like Garp can shave a hundred meters away, right? How many times can Garp shave in five seconds?
Roger the Pirate King is actually not a good person. He can only be regarded as a naive person. Putting his hope on a group of pirates is just a joke.
For the development of **, let's see how Dr. Chen developed gravity.
I found a lot of articles about the Rocks era. No matter how powerful the protagonist is. Rocks will definitely die in the end. The main character is a little bit awesome. Or be forcibly sealed by Im for many years. Or the system forcibly seals it. Can you write a story with a very powerful protagonist? Directly killing the protagonist group?
Updates are too slow and lack of power. Please update it soon so I can reward you.
Damn Wang Zhi, the author is a chicken.
About Chapter 39 of "The Great Voyage: Breaking into the Rocks Group at the Beginning" written by Tomato Fried L1, Lin Nuo shows off his power! Warring States Period, Garp was furious (Please give me flowers! Please collect it!) Chapter review.
Author, your writing is really good.
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Commentary on Chapter 185: Generals of the Rocks Pirates in "The Great Voyage: Breaking into the Rocks Pirates at the Beginning" written by Tomato Fried L1.