
Age of Discovery: From the Start, I Storm the Rocks Pirates
大航海:开局强闯洛克斯天团
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- Ongoing
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- 1.5M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
733Chapters
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48.5kFlowers
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Does Devil Fruit have any cooling effect? Look at that yellow monkey, how fun it is with kicking at the speed of light
The protagonist must have eaten the Payne Fruit. The Gravity Fruit is really wasted. Not to mention, it's all about Payne's abilities, and there are also skill cooldowns. You really can't copy them without thinking, right?
The fruit with a cooling function is not called the Gravitation Fruit, it should be called the Payne Fruit. Even a god-level fruit becomes a useless fruit if it cools down for five seconds. Five seconds is enough for others to kill you hundreds of times. To practice shaving, you have to step on the ground more than ten times in 0.36 Seconds, not to mention the speed of those peak powerhouses.
To tell a joke, the great swordsman who doesn't have any domineering power of three colors really wants to see the protagonist being beaten to death by the natural element.
Are you here to be funny? The fruit's ability is also cooling, what kind of gravity fruit is this? As for what effect Pain's crude gravity application can have in the world of pirates, Naruto's strongest gravity repulsion skills are the Golden Wheel Reincarnation Explosion and the Silver Wheel Reincarnation Explosion. Just call it the Payne Fruit. What is it called the Gravity Fruit? You use the four basic forces of the universe like this.
Although this seemingly invincible fruit has a cooling time of five seconds, within five seconds, labor and capital are invincible?????????? Cool down???? First of all, Payne's eyes are not his own, and then it is not the cooling time. If you don't know how to write, please don't write thank you.
Payne's skill is the Samsara Eye, and yours is a fruit ability. It's completely different. You can keep Payne's skill while also developing other abilities. Don't make it the same as the skill. It's too rigid. It's absolutely fine to wrap the gravitational repulsion around your body for close combat. You know the Great Shift of the Universe. The two forces pull and twist each other. And being able to manipulate gravity and repulsion means that you can change the direction of force. There are so many things that can be developed. Anyone who has taken a high school physics class can do it.
Why are there so many two-armed people now? It's either a card or a cooldown. Is there something wrong with the author's mind?
With his just-started physical fitness and the newly obtained fruit ability that requires five seconds to cool down, do you dare to say that he is invincible? Are your skills static? A person with several times the physique of an ordinary person can be invincible, but what about the world's most peak physique? Is the power the same? If it's the same, then why don't you continue to practice in the future? Not to mention the world with all kinds of strange abilities. The great swordsman's slashing range is surprisingly long. You may be killed without even knowing where the person is. There are also snipers like Beckman and Jesus Bu. With their knowledge and weapons, it's no problem to hit them for several kilometers, right? With Garp's physical skills, can you, Shinra Tenzheng, kill him? How far can you hit with one Shinra Tianzheng? A strong man like Garp can shave a hundred meters away, right? How many times can Garp shave in five seconds?
After all, you have nine years of compulsory education and have read so many cartoons and novels. You can play a Gravitation Fruit into a Penn Fruit, so you have to have some imagination. It's really boring. No matter what kind of writing is done, it will just copy the original owner's skills, which is boring. Thunder, Anilu, Shaoshao Ace, no matter whether it suits your fighting style or not, just use it anyway, you are too lazy to think about it and still come up with good results, just kidding! I wish I could add skills directly to fruit illustrations like yours.