
Dream of the Red Chamber: Father Lin’s Last Letter Says You Have an Older Brother
红楼,林父遗书,你还有个哥哥
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 153k Words
- Genre
- Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Transmigration & Possession
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
87Chapters
2MReads
2.1kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 17
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This is a new author. I'm curious whether Lin Daiyu's surname is Lin or Daidai. Sometimes I write Lin Daiyu, and sometimes I write Daiyu. To be honest, I don't know what pronoun to use when writing a book.
The writing is too detailed and the pace is a bit slow. The wording is rather sophisticated, but somewhat inappropriate for Fei Lu. The foreshadowing is too long, I guess the protagonist should appear when there is a scene in front of the soul. Again, the pace is too slow. The writing is okay, I'll give it a seven. I hope the plot can be more compact later on. Keep it first and then watch.
Didn't he tell Lin Daiyu in the letter that he had an elder brother? Why didn't Lin Daiyu tell him when they were fighting for the family property?
To be honest, the author didn't understand the priorities.
In the entire seven chapters, I only saw the protagonist come out once.
The writing is pretty good, but the pacing could be a bit slow.
Commentary on Chapter 10 Daiyu Led the Wolf Into the House by "The Red Mansion, Father Lin's Suicide Note, You Still Have a Brother" written by "Leaning on the Railing to Watch the Rain".
Regarding "The Red Mansion, Father Lin's Suicide Note, You Still Have a Brother" written by "Leaning on the Railing to Watch the Rain" 1 Father is in danger, come home quickly! Lin Daiyu goes south! Chapter review.
About "The Red Mansion, Lin's Father's Suicide Note, You Still Have a Brother" written by "Leaning on the Railing to Watch the Rain" 11 Lin Ruhai died of illness! Chapter review.
About "The Red Mansion, Father Lin's Suicide Note, You Still Have a Brother" written by "Leaning on the Railing to Watch the Rain" 15 Could it be that you were deceived by lard? Chapter review.