The Great Voyage: Rob Nami on the Ship and Draw a Lottery from All Realms

The intention is very good. I once had this idea and impulse to write a novel, but the realistic writing slapped me in the face. But the shortcomings are obvious. Various events are too deliberate, and the various motivations of the protagonist are too obvious. Although the readers are no longer troubled by the Riddler, the writing seems too pale. All in all, the novel is great, and it will be even better if you practice it systematically

Hasn't the author seen the RV video? The interior and layout renovated by the protagonist are so low, and there is no bathroom yet. What should I do if I need to go to the bathroom?

If you accept a girl, just accept a girl. Why is it so awkward? The first time we met, it was the most important family. Damn, it was so embarrassing.

I'm still waiting to see other anime plots.

Sorry for causing dissatisfaction among many book friends, so I won't write about Otohime. All chapters deleted.

It's the DK team now, and their AD's ID is ghost.

I discovered One Piece's blind spot, that is, their brothers are all very small. When Ichi Oda and Tenzuki were proven, what was even more exaggerated was Neptune and Princess Otohime. One was twelve meters long, and the other was only two meters. If they both matched their own stature, then Neptune's brothers would not be less than one meter. Or is it that their reproduction is different from what we normal people think?

Once you've finished writing, let's write about other worlds.

A woman has a harem~~~ I didn't even think about reading it after reading the introduction. Transforming into a woman is a good subject, but a woman has a harem~~!

Shenfan is an invincible person with no power but no state of mind. No matter how powerful he is, at least he has the courage to remain unchanged despite the collapse of the mountain. Although his subconscious has adapted to that power, his self-awareness is a fool.

Monthly passes, flowers, and evaluation votes have all been given away, but I still **. The copy flow itself is correct, but the world is not well set up, and it looks very messy. Come on

The most important thing is that it's very low if it can't fly.

Commentary on Chapter 47 Activation Rewards of "Rebirth: Rising from Jinghai" written by Wa Ha.

About "The Heroes of the National Destiny: A Copy of the Wuchang, Watch on the Great Wall" written by Haha Wang! Chapter 158 Six-star weapons, greatly increased in power! Chapter review.

Regarding Chapter 16 of "Fantasy: Please Don't Change My Life" written by Zombie True Ancestor, the True Form Sword of the Five Mountains, the conspiracy of the inner disciples! (Update 5) Chapter review.

About Qianbi's book "Live Broadcast: Naruto blasts the Nine-Tails at the beginning, scaring Boruto" Chapter 23 Boruto: Damn it! ? Why did he die! ? Chapter review.

About Jun Zhi's book "Wind and Cloud: The Eight Styles of the Heavenly Sword are rewarded at the beginning!" Chapter 2 Breakthrough, Eight Styles of Heavenly Sword! [Please give me flowers! Please review! ] Chapter review.

Commentary on Chapter 4: Zygeld's 10% Form in "Elf World: Conquering the Divine Beast Zygeld at the Beginning" written by Chu Yang before Dark.

Fang Yuan, tsk tsk tsk, cheating and dimensionality reduction attack? Or an online show of IQ?

Comments on the chapters of "Global Weirdness: Evolution from Ghost Dolls" written by Apprentice Ninja 033: Going Deep into the Tunnel [Fourth update, please bookmark].

About the book "Fantasy: Eunuchs in the Cold Palace, Many Children and Blessings" written by Xiu Xiu! Chapter 4 I can help the queen conceive the "dragon seed"! Please give me flowers! Please collect it! Chapter review.

Even though you might get angry if you see him sitting down, I still want to kill the eunuch! ! ! ! !