Anime Crossover: My Journey Through Worlds Begins with The Rising of the Shield Hero

You can't tell what's cool about it, you can obviously wear it earlier, otherwise why is it better than anime?

Since there is a mall, it should be able to be replaced with a shield with many abilities, such as a black hole shield, a reflective shield, and an inversion shield, which converts all the damage received into recovery and damage bonus to teammates. Or, like the shield girl, the shield has the ability of gluttony, which can cause damage to the enemy or devour the enemy itself when the shield comes into contact. Or, like the God of Machine, turn the shield into turret armors one after another.

I thought it was a cool article, but it's actually a noob's acceptance letter

If it can bounce off, why not? Point your hand at the enemy and summon the weapon. Then because the hand touches the weapon, it is bounced away, and then the weapon will fly in the direction of the enemy. Why can't it be done like this? Or my idea is too weird. This is somewhat stronger than the damage of the shield. Or throw a dagger or something into the sky, and then use a shield to hit the enemy with them. As long as you practice more, you'll be fine. It is best to apply poison on the knife so that it can be used alone. Or why can't I make a trap? Just go to the store and buy it. Poison, and then they all went into a pit, and then they lured the enemy over and pushed him into the pit, and he was poisoned to death. This is no better than hitting him with a shield. If he wants to climb out, use your shield to push him down. Or simply set fire to the mountain. This is so simple, you need to open your mind. Why is it like playing a game, thinking that the land and the forest cannot be destroyed?

You thought it was Long Ao Tianwen, but in fact you just followed the plot, Ah Q's method of victory.

I have finished reading the current chapter, what can I say! It's ordinary. First of all, I don't know if I missed it or if the gun has been strengthened to be too powerful. And the protagonist knowing the plot is a bummer. I personally think that for example, if you are in a world of swords and magic, it is best to use magic from another world. Do not use modern weapons. This will make the protagonist too invincible. For example, the Holy Emperor is solved too easily. There are many plots of Shield Hero that are not written. Later, the lord should be farming. What I like most when reading fan fiction is that the protagonist knows the plot and takes advantage of it, and then uses the good things of this world to strengthen himself step by step.

Is it so easy to make money now? If you add a few scenes of the protagonist's inner drama to the original work, it can be considered a fan, right?

Why don't you write "Dun Yong"? If you want to write about "Gun Yong", just write "Gun Yong". It will be absolutely popular.

Can the process go faster? Looking at the front, it feels too bland.

What is written is annoying.