Hunter X Hunter: Starting as the Embodiment of Disaster

Xiaojie is not a virgin. If you think about it carefully, who is his father? His father is Jin. He is a person who only depends on his mood in everything he does. Therefore, most of what Xiaojie does depends on his mood. Qi Ya was born in a family of killers, but he has no prejudice against him. On Greed Island, Several people who wanted to take action against him were also killed by him, and the barber at the beginning was even tortured and killed by him. Therefore, Xiaojie was never a virgin. He just focused on the person he killed, whether he knew him or not. If you killed someone who had nothing to do with him, or even the person who took action against him. Then not only will he not have any ideas, but he will also help you

You didn't say you were restricted at the beginning. It's a natural thunder fruit. Can it hit you? Even if it can hit, Lei Ying can destroy an island. I don't believe you haven't seen it. With one move from Al* Lu, Lei Ying can destroy an island, and it can be used continuously. It's just like Ulquiorra's Thunder Spear. It's powerful and can be used continuously.

One million volts can only electrocute Nitro for a second or two? The pirate plot kills people with thunder and lightning, but you also come to kill them in the plot? Do you know what a million volts is? I didn't expect one million volts to electrocute Nitro, but you didn't even get any minor injuries in the short time it took you to be anesthetized? The most frustrating thing when writing about hunters and pirates is to brag about Nitro and Whitebeard. No matter what the protagonist's abilities are, just brag about these two. It's such a paralyzing thing.

Some people ate the thunder fruit and started on the sky-killing island. Some people were still playing electric flowers.

It sounds like he is passionate, but it sounds bad that he has no brains. Without the halo of the protagonist, this kind of person will die faster than the villain.

After reading a few chapters, I felt that Xiaojie was a holy mother, and the pig's feet were so exciting. When he was weak, he did all kinds of bad things in order to survive, such as robbing, lying, and killing people. It was still reasonable. If you don't do that, you can't survive. If someone messes with you, you can kill the other person and you can say that pig's feet are decisive in killing. If others don't provoke you, you will kill people at every turn. Once you have the strength, you will kill innocent people at will.

Can the pace be sped up? Otherwise, few people will dare to read it once you are put on the shelves.

*Tello is bragging about his harm points. Which strong pirate among the pirates would not torture him completely?

If I am correct in the title and I remember correctly, are there any restrictions when it comes to fruiting? But did you write that the fruit ability is too weak? The Thunder Fruit is known as the strongest natural fruit in One Piece

Directly using Qi and then displaying and driving various skills, the effect is estimated to be good. Don't buy chakra or anything like that either. You can still be strong without being taken away. It can also have the effect of cultivating immortality. There is also a small setting of being naturally dull and forgetting a lot of unimportant things, so the description is pretty good. Xiaodi can be given similar skills based on the direction of her reading ability or simply strengthened. But let's strengthen the pig's feet first!