Tomb Robbery: Master Han Laomo, Aning Comes to Visit

It's a very low-level protagonist, which makes me feel a bit awkward.

The male protagonist is too chauvinistic, too selfish, and too self-centered. Is it a tomb robbing novel? The male protagonist should work in a team and have his own team. If Aning is cursed, he should immediately set off to find Muchen Bead. He should not always think about his own affairs. Although selfishness is human nature, it does not fit the type of male protagonist. He should be a sinister and cunning villain.

I've been reading Naruto fanfics before, Kai Huang Madaraye Itachi Shen, but I still can't figure out why it's so popular.

None of the people around Shenzi or the General died miserably. It is not realistic at all to cry to them. At most, it reminds them of their former friends and relatives, and then makes themselves uncomfortable.

I saved more than 70 draws, and I drew Shenhe, which is 70%.

It's really a brainless poisonous person. The protagonist is completely brainless. He doesn't even have the most basic common sense, and he doesn't seriously think about his own path. He is just a retard. The bigger the problem, the more useless the protagonist becomes. It has become an iron rule. The funniest thing is that even though he is in an early stage of development, he still has the points in his hand.

Preventing people from becoming enlightened is like killing a parent. One slap and the protagonist dies.

It feels weird to add a magic value when playing magic. There are regulations on how much magic you can cast in a day. Although the previous books were from the era of pretentiousness and slap in the face, the force and setting were still quite good at that time. As a result, all the good aspects were lost.

Isn't it a bit ridiculous to have hundreds of thousands at most? Normally, a tribe can only have a few hundred or thousands of people at most, and those with tens of thousands of people are very rare. We have to consider the living environment and material and food reserves. How can it be possible to get 300,000 people to attack a village with a few thousand people at most?

Buy thousand-year-old ginseng for 5 million? The author's logic is *eaten*

I just saw one and was hooked. There is no point in being greedy for life and afraid of death. Why, your senior brother has a problem and you don't even try to help him? Hehe

Too short, too many women

Look at this explosion rate, which explodes the beam of light with one sword, and one piece of recycling will arrive in your account in seconds. I am your exclusive recycling manager Zhou Mengda.

I feel like this author definitely has no friends and can't get a girlfriend in reality. He is selfish and self-righteous. Who would fall in love with this kind of character?

Come on, Kaido's ability is not invulnerable. I remember that he seems to have a very strong self-healing ability. Check out One Piece and the Emperor of the Sea. There is a description of Kaido in it. I think his description is more appropriate.

They all have a hermit system, and they even worship him. It's funny. Is this a hermit? I'm afraid he's just pretending to be a high-profile person.

The writing is messy, why don't you save me later? The human race itself is not bad. I don't even know what Min He's past life was even if the four human races are still alive? Looking at the strange words, there are few, few questions, few words, and typos

Magic and mana points are equivalent to skills and blue bars for playing the game. If the mana is gone, he is useless. He is still a mage with a high mana consumption. The internal strength of martial arts masters is better than this. I thought it was someone like Han Laomo who cultivated immortality. It was like an online game. He didn't dare to use his skills when fighting minions, and he didn't have enough mana to fight bosses.

This novel gave me a feeling of swallowing up the starry sky of Teyvat

I just want to know why women's clothing articles are so popular now. Is there something wrong with my aesthetics, or am I unable to keep up with the trend? Do you like reading articles about women's clothing? I'm still a little disgusted by boys wearing women's clothes.

Xi'er: "Brother, where did you think you were? Huh? There is another woman! What should I do? Let's chop her off."

If it really doesn't work, the author should not take this path! So damn poisonous

Smiling but not laughing, Otto is a real man

I really don't understand what's so shocking about entering Xiaoyao in one step. It's not like I started from no cultivation and entered Xiaoyao directly.

I haven't been able to understand it since Qin Dynasty

Chapter 19 is wrong again, the plot is very sudden, the transition to the part about Yu Yu is stiff and abrupt, and the three brothers and sisters were clearly going home from a meeting together, why did they suddenly turn into two sisters and Yu Yu making pork head meat at home and saying, brother, you are back? ?

I can't survive in Feilu with this update speed.

About "The Great Desolation: The Sword Art with Grass Characters at the Beginning, the Light of the Sword Moves Kunlun" written by Ren Wei'a Chapter 2: Nine-leaf Sword Grass! Sound in Kunlun! (The new book is begging to be reviewed and collected by Flowers!)) Chapter review.

The timeline of Ghost Blowing Lamp and Fairy Jue Ancient City should be before stealing the pen. The age of Tamutuo actually ranked before Jingjue Ancient City. When I saw this, I immediately went crazy.

Chapter 254: What the hell is Liu Yifei?