Wuxia: My Improper Diary Is Exposed on the Golden List

They say that Immortal Fate has to go to the jade in person to get it without protection. Is that Immortal Fate? It is a wanted order, telling everyone clearly that as long as the people on the list get it, they will be rewarded, and they can also snatch the rewards of the people on the list. Those dynasties directly guard the jade with heavy troops, and then send people to arrest the people on the list. This is a real failure.

In the future, when writing books, it is better to set up the character's personality. The protagonist who is full of sperm is no longer mainstream. Look at the protagonist next door driving a Gundam in martial arts. The character of the protagonist is very good.

Can you still produce the effect of a nuclear explosion by throwing a cannon? One of the four major sword techniques of the Qingyun Sect, the Tai Chi Xuan Qing Dao can only be used by reaching the Qing Realm. The extremely talented Xue Qiyu Qing Jing 67th Level can even vomit blood. The fourth level of Yuqing Realm is already able to control the sword and fly. What is Mingyu's skill to move the divine sword and control the thunder?

The subject matter is okay. The only criticism is that the character setting of the protagonist is too bad. Who in the right mind would write that kind of content? Except for some work, it can be about the contamination of Kang Min and her lover. It is also okay to write about the protagonist's sympathy and injustice for Qiao Feng. Why is it a buttery-looking story? The first point of the characterization is bad. Even if the setting of the protagonist is modified later, it will not change the impression of people who have seen him.

Serious people, who keeps a diary?

You, a Tiandao from the mixed martial arts world, actually have the top-notch martial arts skills from the fantasy world, and you don't have to write a draft to brag.

After it was put on the shelves, the content was not very subtle. All kinds of ridiculous treasures were distributed casually. Although this is an invincible article, the combat value will definitely collapse after doing so. The plot is probably a nesting doll, and the characters of several girls have also collapsed. There are also very few plots related to the male protagonist. It is not as funny as the LSP plot in the first 20 or 30 chapters.

I've given you the monthly pass, but you've given up your choice.

I'm short and weak, but I also want flowers. If I don't write dozens of chapters, I won't give you the flowers if they are available.

There is no transfer of conflicts, there is no comparison when there are good things, and the opportunities are not revealed. If you don't open other planes to fight, how can you prove that the things you gave are evil? We know what the use is. You have to say it. Wealth does not return home like a night walk in brocade.