
National Fate: Playing Bronya, with E as My Teammate
国运:扮演布洛妮娅,队友是e总
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 304k Words
- Genre
- Urban Romance
- Subgenre
- Urban Superpowers
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
186Chapters
2.8MReads
67.7kFlowers
10.0Score
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If this teammate plays the role of a basilisk, more people will watch it. Female videos are still not as popular as male videos in Feilu.
I guess most of the people who can come are here to see Mr. E.
Young author! You don't want your family to know that you write this kind of novel, right? (●—●)
I would like to ask if Mr. E can do it better than Immortal Red Kite?
The Lawyer of Reason, as long as he analyzes any matter and has enough knowledge, he can use his own power to destroy, copy and create items.
You wrote about Taixu Mountain, which fascinated me since the beginning. Every time I read what you wrote, I held my breath. You should write about fighting, either crushing, or the enemy is slightly stronger or fundamentally stronger than the protagonist. The problem is, when you encounter strength, you become stronger. If you want to show that the protagonist is invincible and not defeated, I suggest you write it like other novels of the same type and just give the protagonist the final template. If you want to write about a battle of wits and a little emotional color, you must have some twists and turns. I am not saying that there are no twists and turns, but the performance is very poor. The complicated fighting and speculation can last for several chapters. You can show the protagonist and the enemy standing and thinking about the confrontation, but you keep writing, and the language is very complicated, which makes it very dizzy. I haven't read The Scholars and Foreign History so much. The most important thing is that a bunch of audience members who don't understand anything are sending random barrages during the protagonist's emotional drama, saving others, and fighting the enemy seriously, and they can't understand the seriousness of the scene at all. Do you want to embody the rabble? You don't write about emotional resonance, but intersperse this kind of intellectual barrage in it. Is the scope of your writing too broad? The two choices are the best, one is the simplest, the invincible panel, the Herrscher of the End, the six-core Siren or Kevin arrangement, although not novel but good-looking. Second, there are twists and turns in the plot, but don't use witty barrages, explore mysteries, study emotions, don't spend a lot of money on fighting rhetoric, reveal the secrets of the world, and find everyone's experience under the Honkai Impact. But if you just go through Fu Hua's past like now, the emotions are not strong enough for the outside audience to understand, instead of launching violent barrages when the protagonist is emotionally involved, to personally participate in everyone's secrets and show them to people, there are many choices. In fact, it is difficult to add elements of knights, and it is difficult to have a good look and feel with an incompatible world view. If you want feelings, there is Kiana, the Herrscher of Fire. For conspiracy, there's Otto. To be mysterious, there are Yayi and Yingjie. But you added Bronya's panel and made Mr. E act as the antagonist, which is completely incomprehensible. The worlds of Honkai Impact and Persona face different emotions. In my opinion, the villains in Persona only add new interest and cannot communicate with Bronya. Even if the protagonist is an armored warrior, they are still somewhat similar. This is the limitation of different circles. If the writing is not good, it will be uncomfortable to watch. Special photography and two-dimensional animation can be creative, but once it reaches the level of rigorous plot planning, there will be a great sense of rejection.
Why are all the salted ducks here? They have such obvious silver hair. Can anything be included in the national fortune now? (I'm not shady, I still like ducks and ducks very much)
I just want to know if E can beat Honkai Consciousness.
When the two of them first appeared on the stage, they said that they were just two outsiders, not from their own country. Then there were all kinds of ridicule. When they were swallowed by the monster, they started to scold the two of them. Then when the curry was ready, they expressed envy and said that they were a country of etiquette and would not do shameless things. Co-author, you are writing about external affairs, that is, champagne and wine, but internally, there is a lot of gunfire, right?
Shouldn't the salted duck be floating?