Create the Eternal Sword at the Beginning, Shocking Erina's Eyes

Why are you talking so much? People are superficial animals and just believe in the facts in front of them! Your shop is slovenly and your clothes are not neat and tidy. The first impression gives people a bad feeling. You are not a worldly expert. You think you are filming a movie. What era are you in!

The protagonist has a brain problem

A harem or something, it looks like entering a palace, I started talking about who I like, but after so many times, no relationship is confirmed.

A broken crew has nothing. Who dares to sign a 10-year contract with you? Really?

Firstly, the beginning of the book offended a group of Erina fans. She is not bad in nature but was deliberately belittled by the author. This shows that the author is not a humble person. Secondly, the author's plate is one of his favorite customers. Sorry, I hate this kind of plot of using fat pigs to contrast the protagonist. **. Thirdly, the protagonist has no credibility. He agreed with Alice on a price of 10 billion. Later I thought If the effect of your own knife is better than expected, you can raise the price at will. It's okay for you to raise the price to people other than Alice. But if you say 10 billion and turn around and ask for 20 billion, no matter what the reason, it shows that there is a problem with the author's integrity. Although the work of a person with poor character is okay, the book collection of this kind of person will be ruined, because your book is not the kind of work that people can't live without.

The quality of Yongling Knife is really rubbish.

The effect of Yongling Knife is to restore freshness, so the question arises: what happens when you cut salted fish?

You can even look at the front and back, which is a direct insult to your IQ.

I'm hooked after reading less than half of the first chapter.

Chapter 74 is repeated, and there is no single chapter to apologize later. It was a good subject matter, but it turned you into a piece of shit.

Continue to target Erina, it's your benefit, but she's unhappy

It's really a **. The protagonist keeps saying he won't lick, but in fact he tolerates Erina's various behaviors without a bottom line. Isn't this a different kind of licking*? You also use the excuse that Erina has not grown up and immature, but you can blame me. If someone really wants to find trouble, who cares whether he has grown up or not, or whether he has matured mentally or not. Even if he is a real brat, if he makes someone angry, he will still beat him or scold him. Who can he use such a lame excuse to fool! And people in this world are really so observant. With such magical kitchen utensils, how could they not try to take over the forging technology? Not to mention that the protagonist is still a loner with no power. Everyone in the co-author is true, kind and beautiful, right?

Even the Zanpakutō is stronger than the Eireito

But that tough-talking attitude can basically be said to be directed at dishes that are weaker than her and considered low-level in her eyes due to her ghost father's education. Moreover, Erina does have the capital to be arrogant. After all, the God's Tongue family is powerful and her strength is extremely high. Under various conditions among her peers, as long as she does not know that the other party is extremely powerful, she has the qualifications to be arrogant. Even in Neon, even if she is powerful, she will sell face.

Don't people have memories? How do you know the way home?

The beginning of the plot is stiff,

Why do I feel that the male protagonist is a bit awkward in the plot?

The formation mage is played as a warrior. This is a very powerful piece of meat. I thought it was using formations to kill enemies, but it turned out to be infinite close combat, and it was the kind that had no skills and relied on attributes.

Wow! Finally, someone is writing about a hacker. What I really want to see the most is a protagonist with the ability to extract templates, who can use template abilities to do things in various worlds to become stronger. Then I thought: there are so many alien heroes in hackers, would it be fun if we could use the template forms of these heroes to do things? ! That must be interesting

Isn't Gomora a master of super shock waves? It's just thunder. You're fucking kidding me.

You are writing an imaginary historical article. There is no need to be serious about whether the historical time is correct. The real history tells us that the eldest son, Chiang Ching-kuo, was in the Soviet Union from ** to **. He went to the Soviet Union to attend university, and later went to the Red Army Military and Political School. He was detained in the Soviet Union and was not allowed to come back. He only came back in 37 years. It doesn't matter if you are writing an imaginary article.

Seventy-seven and seventy-six, repeated

马龙的中投不应该只有83

It's really a bit speechless to take people to visit.

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