Doomsday Descends: I Navigate the Apocalypse One Step at a Time

In fact, the author of this book has stepped into many pitfalls. First, the number of words is too few. According to my understanding, a new book should start with 100,000 words as the base and 50,000 words as the manuscript. Unless you code quickly or save a lot of manuscripts. Second, Holy Mother, in the beginning, it was okay to seduce people to grab food, but later on, because I couldn't bear it, I helped the army. Will this help the male protagonist? This will only make the male protagonist look like a virgin. This is the most taboo thing about male videos, because most boys can only think rationally, which makes them feel very immersive. Third, the motive is unclear. My understanding is that some foreshadowing needs to be written before it is put on the shelves, and of course it must also be fun. But in the early stage, the author wrote too many things that described the cruelty of the end of the world. It was neither exciting nor foreshadowing, and there was no sense of expectation. If you want to write these, you can intersperse them later. You should think of ways to retain readers in the early stage.