An Outer God's Journey Through a Crossover World

If you have a baby, don't come. Boys won't like it.

The male protagonist is Yog-Sothoth, right?

The protagonist is no longer a human being, why do you still care so much?

This is my first time writing a fanfic, so I don't understand the rules very well, so please bear with me. If you have any suggestions, please tell me! Please.

This is really my first time, and I don't know how to write well. So far, only one good brother said that my writing was like a running account without any polish. If you don't tell me that my writing is not good, I will probably make the same mistake over and over again, and in the end my writing will be pulpy.

It feels a bit weak, at least it needs to evolve faster than Alex who killed his original form.

In my opinion, it is one of the few comics that can be read, but I hope the author can polish his writing in the future. The pace is a bit fast, and I hope the author can keep it up.

Maybe it's because of my low education. The first chapter was quite messy and I didn't quite understand it. Most of the content didn't seem to make sense. It was about time travel, and the protagonist's identity seemed to be particularly powerful and high-level. In the second chapter, after the protagonist discovered that he had traveled through time and became an alien god, he immediately became very proud and separated himself from humans. Uh,,, don't you think it's too sudden? It's obviously just time travel. Of course, if this is a foreshadowing, just pretend I didn't say it.

It's been a long time since I've seen a comprehensive comic with a theme like this that involves so many worlds and it's not so tedious.

This subject is very novel, I'm optimistic about you