Master the Illustrations and Create the Elf World

开头第一个剧情就让人倒胃口。 看简介还以为主角的系统能直接给实物，结果拉胯到只能给设计资料，甚至还要主角手动传输到电脑。 先不论光刻机里面的设计图主角一个没学过专业软件的人怎么弄出来。 也不论主角电脑里有没有对应的专业设计软件。 也不论光刻机的资料多到主角一个人要花多少时间才能打出来。 也不论主角打错几个参数会导致什么后果。 以上这些都先不论，我就问一个问题：即使全套设计资料摆在你面前，你以为就能制造出来成品吗？ 没有对应的先进基础物理材料学光学等技术支撑，你造个毛的高端光刻机！

The Sharingan can also evolve in a positive way, but unfortunately it is more likely to be negative, and relying on negative evolution can easily lead to extremes. Xia Youjie also absorbed the negative emotions of the curse spirit and also affected him.

The subject matter is good, but the pace is too fast

After reading the first few chapters, I can't figure out how the protagonist got the confidence to show off with golden weapons before he has grown up. This is a failure when teaming up to fight monsters.

主角存在感太低了，作者前面根本没搞清重点视角要放在谁身上，就主角失踪那里，就掉线了多少章，看你书名来的，结果文笔根本没满足读者的期望，但凡加强主角戏份，都会看着好不少

Both of them are realists, fighting for their ideals and beliefs

The dialogue in the latest chapter of Shi Hao's inner drama is even more ridiculous. Can he escape his tragic fate by worshiping Yuan Shi as his disciple? Damn it, Yuan Shi is Hunyuan and Shi Hao is also Hunyuan. Since Hunyuan can change destiny, why did Emperor Huang Tian worship Yuan Shi as his disciple? I myself am Hunyuan, can't I do it on my own?

Your favorite Xiang Yu, who killed, captured and burned Xianyang, was happily driving backwards and became his overlord of Western Chu. When he gets old and can no longer be suppressed, it will just be the restart of the Warring States Period. By then, Da Qin will be nothing more than the Franks of Europe, a temporary flash of glory. As soon as Liu Bang was old, he led his brothers to bring peace to the world. The Han Dynasty inherited the Qin system and at the same time made reforms to live with the people. Liu Bang, a sixty-year-old man who was still lying on the door panel to fight in person, an emperor who traveled without four horses of the same color, and an emperor who was kind and friendly to his subordinates, was treated as a villain just because of his rogue character. Some people can be said to have a dark psychology.

The author should write the protagonist better, it's too useless

我找到一本和这书基本一模一样的？那么问题来了，谁抄书了么？

I just want to know what do you think, author? It can make the protagonist play badly with good cards! When you think about opening a store, you know that you first need to be famous! You don't have anything but you want others to spend a lot of money to buy something that doesn't fit their world view. Do you think they are stupid? If you can send elves to you at the beginning, then look for someone who can send them to you! There are real Pokémon out there and you're afraid you won't be able to sell them? And what are you using your superpower for? Like that old woman, wouldn't it be enough if you use telepathy to calm her down, and then try to talk about fate or something like fate? I almost didn't send it out yet.

It's a good book, but it's a mess

The official always belongs to a group composed of people from the upper city!

Author, since To* is a gift package for Saints, let the protagonist get the template of the five Saints after sublimating the critical attack. It is the template of the Five Saints who beat Hades and Kamikawa's sacred clothes. Not only do they have five sets of sacred clothes, but also all the skills of the five, especially Zilong's moves, which are the most handsome and powerful, okay? Author! Please reply!

符文之地不是龙王造的，所以毁灭符文之地对祂来说没有心理障碍，但是无尽星空很多星星都是龙王铸造的，相当于祂的孩子，也是祂的力量，而攻击一次巨神，就有一个星星毁灭，而且原文也说了，祂攻击巨神的时候有星星毁灭，这意味着祂能打巨神，不然咋知道会有星星毁灭，至于困厄于一种强大的魔法，只能说这个魔法在某方面确实强大，因为龙王解不开他，但是不代表这个魔法能把龙王变成没有灵智的傀儡，就像我有个生命链接魔法，链接地球，我死了地球跟着死，你敢杀我吗？你不敢，那你就困厄于我的魔法之中，而你困厄于我的魔法，说明我的魔法对你来说是一种强大的魔法，可是这和能不能攻击我没有关系，你能攻击我，但是你不敢而已。

To be honest, I think most of the authors of novels like this don't know the meaning of the word "caution"

老夫我来送你一场造化吧！ ┏┳━━━━━━━━━━━━┓ ┃┃████████████┃ ┃┃███████┏━┓██┃ ┣┫███████┃水┃██┃ ┃┃███████┃帝┃██┃ ┃┃███████┃真┃██┃ ┣┫███████┃经┃██┃ ┃┃███████┗━┛██┃ ┣┫████████████┃ ┃┃████████████┃

This is a very refreshing Three Kingdoms novel. There is no need to worry about the age of the protagonist. The author has already patched it up. He has practiced the mysterious skills and has a figure like a teenager. Since my figure is already in my teens, there is no need to worry about age.

写洪荒能越修为而战的都是制作，你以为你写的是玄幻？玄幻跟神话区别大的很，同等还差不多，还超越修为大

The quasi-god wants **w, and the Yusanjia wants **w. The price is too high. If you calculate the others, the minimum price may be hundreds of thousands. If you have a general appearance, you can't calculate it like this. Unless you are a good-looking person, the middle and lower classes can't afford it.

I don't like the protagonist's personality. He already has a tendency to lick his gou. The invincible novel is more suitable for a cold and carnivorous protagonist. If you don't like it, don't reply.

It's all revisions, I can't see the article, what the hell?

Can you please stop doing licking*? A great man doesn't have sex with a woman. How come you are a nouveau riche girl?

其实我主要是来见见世面，作者多讲点道理，以后出去社会也好少走一点弯路。

Why hasn't it been updated today?

Suddenly it occurred to me that Pokémon has a king who is also an old woman.

看你一本，你太监一本，快失去对你的信任了

This dark figure should be Honglian. Could it be that the X-antibody gave him complete control over the power of chaos?

Commentary on Chapter 23: Rushing to Kyoto in the book "The Republic of China: The Four Families After Bald Headed Down to the Wild" written by Ru Qiu.

. . . Isn't Silver Spacetime after Iron Spacetime? ? What happened after Dadong regained his combat power?