Fantasy: Get a Disciple and Get Billions of Times the Critical Hit Back!

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Here are a few things I want to complain about so far: Are the protagonist's supreme sword bones and holy skills just decorations? So far, none of the protagonist's cultivation is achieved by himself. It is all rewarded by the apprenticeship system. As for his apprentice, his qualifications are not as good as the protagonist's, and his practice skills are not as good as the protagonist's. After just one month of training, he can improve a few small realms, and even directly improve 9 small realms. What about the protagonist, he only improved 3 small realms after taking a heaven-level magic pill? Is this the ultimate talent and holy technique? Xiao Zi's awakening of bloodline and the state of returning to the ancestors did not improve? Deliberately lowering the protagonist's realm? Just to show the protagonist's superior combat power? The cheater is always only one level higher than the disciple? When you reach the ninth level, you can kill nine half-step yin and yang. When you reach the ninth level, another half-step yin and yang pops up to mock the protagonist? That's it, I no longer have any desire to continue reading.

I feel that the word cold noodles is obviously not in line with the author's realm and height, so I think it is best to add the word North Korea in front of cold noodles.

You have more powerful qualifications than the apprentice, but your cultivation speed is not as good as the apprentice. What's the use of your qualifications? Isn't it funny? Moreover, it seems that without systematic rewards, the realm will not improve.

**, Write an article about recruiting all female apprentices, **vomited

After reading a few chapters, what the hell is that Huang Tan? ? ?

The writing is very strange. The younger generation is in their teens and twenties, and their cultivation is almost compared with those who have practiced in the Tongtian realm for hundreds of years. Don't you feel contradictory to the author? And there are more than one or two, it's a bunch of people... No, it's a bunch of them, almost everyone has some talent, and their cultivation level is very high. Those talented masters may have practiced for hundreds or thousands of years in vain.

Is there anything like the sword energy rolling over the dragon wall, the sword immortal kneeling down, etc.?

**, I just can't figure out why all the disciples are female. I feel like vomiting.

It's just everyday life, it looks so boring

Pretending to be cool in a fantasy world will not last long

There are four updates a day, and yesterday's update was still a reminder.

Speechless, it was written in such a mess, it completely fell apart afterward.

Just don't stop, I like this series

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