Uncle Jiu, If You Keep Bragging, I Will Be Invincible.

I probably know a few points of this kind of writing without reading it. First, I am frustrated, then reverse, then show off, slap in the face, and finally, another family and the protagonist's family are probably talking about something bigger... Tsk, tsk, tsk~~ The thousand-year-old family is really free.

And this kind of physique? Of course, it would be reasonable if the saint you are talking about is a Confucian saint. If it is a saint like prehistoric times, it is simply nonsense.

1 Age, according to the current situation of the protagonist, if you don't deliberately let the protagonist transition for a certain period of time, he will be less than 10 years old within 200 chapters. You can't possibly write the finale when the protagonist is underage, right? Br2 game skills. . You can play for a little bit, but it doesn't matter if you let reality. First of all, Galen's spinning in circles is just relying on his own physical advantage. You have to imagine that in reality he is holding an epee, let alone a big sword. You will be exhausted even if you turn a few times. If you are weak, you can't turn. If you are strong, there is no need. It is too useless. As for the big sword. . Tell me how an ordinary person can jump two or three meters with an epee and then plunge it down. . In zombie movies, who can jump a few meters with a heavy sword except zombies? . And if you insert it, it's not like people won't hide from br3 the underworld. There is an underworld in Uncle Jiu's world view, and those who are successful in Maoshan's Taoism can hold positions in the underworld. I forgot which movie it was, it seems like the one where ghosts watch TV? Br

Every time, the Taoist heart collapses. How many of these Taoist hearts are there? Isn't the Taoist heart of a Taoist very important? If it collapses, don't go crazy.

It is best to blur the realm, otherwise the protagonist's ability will easily collapse. Moreover, whether it is a ghost movie world or a horror movie world, basically it will not talk about the realm. Most of them will talk about the number of years of practicing Taoism, what kind of magic skills you know, etc. Each sect has different names for their own cultivation, such as the Celestial Masters of Maoshan and Longhu Mountain, most of them The real person of the Taoist priest, the corpse ancestor in Zombie Dating, the King Kong of the monk, the Nine-Tails of the fox demon, the Confucian scholar, etc. Different cultivation methods are different. If you write about a film and television drama, this kind of strength is relatively vague, and cross-level counter-killing is common, so if you write about this realm, it will be difficult to explain how to achieve the counter-killing effect.

Your literary genius Qiusheng is like a waste. Can you change it? Anyway, you are writing an invincible novel. It is impossible to let the protagonist do everything. Sometimes, let them do the work. Otherwise, what will happen to the protagonist?

The setting of Daoxin is not good

Basically, it's all about comedy. You can't watch it with your brain. You're only eight years old. Even if Taozu is reincarnated, he can't be so outrageous. He still understands English and the coffee master should be written by a 16-year-old or something. After studying abroad, this is too outrageous.

The first part of this book is very interesting and funny, and it belongs to the ** invincible novel. Although the routines are the same, people who read it can't help but laugh when they see Uncle Jiu and the other uncles subduing demons for the sake of performance. This is the highlight. In this book, I went to Xiangjiang, and the protagonist became boring after a hundred years of seclusion. In the new plot, I feel that the protagonist is no longer a person, just like a background board. Although he is in the plot, he has no sense of participation at all, and he does not know the so-called pretentiousness. Moreover, he is not the same character as the 8-year-old protagonist in the Republic of China.

The little proud blood was written to death again.

The protagonist's cultivation level has never been high. Is this good?

Has it always been a deadlock? It seems to me that they are all in the world of rigid appointments. Is there no other world? The world of Zhu Xian and the world of Hua Qianliu Everything is fine, brother, the author

8 Years old? So mature? Is ginseng refined?

Travel to other worlds to complete dungeons, such as Zero Witch, the game version of Silent Hill, and the Waste Man.

Author, regarding my last comment, I let the protagonist's Dragon Abyss merge with the Heavenly Sin in Fengyun to obtain three forms. What do you think? Can you think about it?