Xuanhuan: Plunder Fortunes for Ten Thousandfold Critical Hits!

The description of the protagonist getting into trouble is too deliberate. The villain appears after every critical attack. This happens many times. It feels like after the protagonist gets an opportunity, he waits for the villain to appear.

After seizing the opportunity, stand still and wait for a zz villain to come and slap the pig's feet in the face.

If you don't accept it, don't describe it in detail, okay? I wrote it but didn't accept it. I'm so far away from this person, and I don't even have the same appearance as the heroine.

Author, your description of passers-by is a bit excessive! I can barely tolerate a lot of other problems, but if this problem is not corrected as described by passers-by, I will die! The villain troubles the protagonist and then a bunch of stranger descriptions, then the villain says something and a bunch of stranger descriptions, the protagonist fights back and a bunch of stranger descriptions, the villain uses a move and a stranger describes it, the protagonist uses a move and stranger descriptions, stranger descriptions, stranger descriptions, and after one chapter of stranger descriptions, 80% of the content is stranger descriptions. Are you kidding me? It's not that I don't want you to describe it to strangers, but don't go too far. Just two or three sentences will do. Don't go too far. How many fans of those little white writers don't dare to go too far even if they measure the number of words. They all restrain themselves from describing to strangers at most a few sentences at a time, and they don't describe it to strangers so frequently. It's so fucking annoying to me that I can't read anymore because of this. Eating instant noodles once is delicious, eating it again is good, continuing to eat it is reluctant, continuing to eat it means you are sick, eating it again means you feel like vomiting, if you eat one thing continuously, no matter how delicious it is, you will vomit. Don't you understand this truth, author? You should also eat with restraint. Eat it occasionally instead of eating it all the time. Moreover, the problem is that this food is not delicious and you still want readers to eat it all the time. Isn't this a pure ** reader? If this problem is not corrected, I will definitely not be the only reader who will abandon it. There will definitely be many readers who will abandon it, but they will just ** it without saying it out loud.

I have let the tiger return to the mountain many times, but I don't even want to watch this.

I'm not scolding you either. I know my own articles well. Floo is originally a good article, but you are just going back and forth like this, and everyone is annoyed by it. Maybe you have reached the word count, but will anyone really want to keep reading? This hydrology. It's not completely satisfying. Everyone is not a fool, as you can tell from this article. Originally, your subject matter was quite good, and I wanted to read it all the time, but you are really wordy. Making a fortune silently is the way to go. The protagonist faces critical attacks from others every time, for fear that others will not have the courage, right? Wouldn't it work if I put it in my storage bag and hit it with a critical strike? Except for some characters, you can just take away the other fixed ones. You still have to wait for the original owner to come over and have a fight with them. Occasionally, it will be fine. It has always been like this. Is it interesting?

I suggest that Tianhuo Sanxuanbian give her a big bag. What do you think you are? I don't even think about what I could do if I changed my position.

Apart from saying yes, I can't think of any other reason to refute it.

What kind of mess is this written? Damn it. At the beginning of the writing, he felt a bit like a villain, but now he feels like a protagonist. He is always provoked by others, and he likes to pretend to be behind the scenes - things like fists, will you die soon if you are a pretentious person? I also wanted to pretend to be like the protagonist. I was really convinced, but the protagonist was still the villain. Damn it.

Many places are illogical. In Chapter 41, others can break through from the third level to the fifth level. You still have the opportunity to critically hit, but you can only go from the first level to the third level. There are many places that are unreasonable. I am really speechless.