The Shepherd of the Red Chamber

I'm really speechless. If the protagonist's reason for fighting is to conquer the army, it doesn't matter. He actually thinks that the system rewards him with 6,000 men to defeat 300,000. That's ridiculous. After winning the battle, there aren't even a few people left. We won't write about dozens of casualties, right? He has exhausted all his strength and is not an ancient person, so why should he be so loyal? And if you really win, the emperor will be afraid of you. If you are only involved in politics or military affairs, the emperor can tolerate you. If you have military and political power in his hands, how can the emperor tolerate you?

Author, it's boring to write like this. It's hard to follow. You can even do the opposite, and you even do a trick of getting pregnant and giving birth to a child before sending it to the palace. What do you think? It's not that you have no strength, and you want to send a daughter to the emperor. If you write like this, few people will pursue it. What netizens hate the most is giving away a daughter.

In ancient times, it was a big problem to have no children after three years of marriage. Well, you didn't write it at all.

Even if the gods come, they may not be able to draw it. A Song 1 stone bow weighs about 95 kilograms. 200 Stones is a ** kilogram bow? The golden cudgel only weighs ** kilograms, and most gods cannot pull this 200 stone bow.

It's amazing. The author's name looks so familiar. I took a look at his collection and found that none of the 33 novels have been completed. All of them have been cut.

To correct me, Zhang Liao didn't almost capture Sun Jian alive, he almost captured Sun Quan alive. Sun Jian had been dead for more than ten years during the Battle of Hefei. When Sun Jian died, Zhang Liao was still hanging around with Lu Bu.

Seriously, don't write in the direction of rebellion, it's cliche.

It's so embarrassing that the author doesn't even have any basic common sense. Let's talk about the battlefield: 1. The protagonist turns from literature to military. You are both civil and military, and you are also a human being. Your emperor asked you to be a general to rescue the border, but he did not give you soldiers and horses. If you go to the north, where will you find soldiers? 2. You left the capital alone, and suddenly you had elite troops at your disposal. Even if you win in the end, tell me, where did your troops come from? Not to mention that you recruit or the entire army, don't the soldiers need to be trained? How much better can the quality of newly trained soldiers be? Even in the Duke's Mansion, you don't have that many private soldiers, so the protagonist is a privately trained army? Are you going to rebel? **Breaking 100,000, or a head-to-head confrontation, even if they are Captain America, you have to die, tell me how you can beat me? Even the whole army was wiped out, even the Romance of the Three Kingdoms could not write this. 4. Knowing that the protagonist has such an elite unit and has just killed 100,000, using 200,000 to wipe out all your elite troops is definitely a good deal and the loss will definitely be less than 20,000.

The human king Fuxi Leize came to the world after being pregnant, and the emperor of the Han Dynasty killed the white snake and became the king. Every saint who comes to the world must be extraordinary. The four princes and eight princes of the Jia family are the leaders, the disciples in the army and the old officials are unknown, and they come to the world with jade in their hands... It's really cowhide, and the emperor has no money and no pomp. Not low-key but publicized, it's really bullshit

You can judge the author's experience and writing style through Jia Yucun Jia Yucun looked at this person's experience alone and found that he was just like the protagonist in the novel. Although his family was weak and poor, he had lofty ambitions and was quite talented. He passed the imperial examination and became a magistrate. Because he had just entered the officialdom, he offended his superiors and colleagues, so he was dismissed by his superiors. Later, he became Daiyu's teacher and was reinstated. The counterattack of a real low-level person. Why is Jia Yucun said to be a quality appraiser? People like Jia Yucun can be said to be everywhere in official circles in society. In the mind of the author of Diode, good guys and bad guys are clearly distinguishable. Jia Yucun must be the villain and must be killed. Jia Yucun is a double-edged sword. Whether it hurts the enemy or yourself depends entirely on the person holding the sword. If you can't tolerate Jia Yucun, how can you tolerate the civil and military forces of the Manchu Dynasty? The whole world is dark, but I am the only one left alone?