Comprehensive Comics: I Am Really Not the True Ancestor of Vampires

Why do I feel that the writing is getting worse and worse? The plot is a bit bland. The male protagonist is still a eunuch after more than a hundred chapters. The other female protagonists rarely have opportunities to appear. The most scenes are with the foursome of Yukino Shinomiya and Gabrielle.

So I want to ask, does the protagonist look heroic? I don't mean anything else, I just feel that someone who can occupy one side of the Three Kingdoms still needs someone to pass on his spirit.

How can I put it, it's too bland, and there is no desire to read it. In more than 20 chapters, there are about 10 heroines who are likely to be backup heroines, and they are the kind that are given for free. There is no emotional line, and they fall in love just because they are handsome. This is no longer a harem, this is about becoming a stud. In short, but All the women who appear in the article are the protagonists, which give people a very frivolous feeling. No matter how handsome the author writes, he can't get rid of the frivolous and vulgar image of the protagonist. As long as she is a good-looking woman, she will flirt with her. There is no use in giving a sense of ability. There is no extraordinary, no rival, and no enemy. It is better to add charm to seduce girls.

Are you still writing? I won't write about removing the bookshelf anymore.

It's really intoxicating to use a superpower as a decoration.

Let's add Dangan Rinpo. I recently read a novel and suddenly wanted to read Dangan Rinpo. I'm really hungry for the characters in it.

1. Suggestions for follow-up content 2. Character requirements and suggestions 3. Plot editing suggestions, etc.

I always feel that your writing style is quite similar to A Fei's?

Why haven't you found your form after being a pigeon for a day?

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Not only licking, but also a DINN, 9

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