Seafaring: Teammate Feng Baobao, with the Origin of Qi from the Start

Since you wrote about following the ship, the big boss and powerful enemies should be left to Luffy to deal with, and the generals and kings should be dealt with. Otherwise, what kind of captain would he be?

The biggest failure is that there is reality

Soul piercing, soul piercing, soul piercing again, can you die if you write about it? The original body is an ordinary person, so he has to do soul-transportation? Can't you set the protagonist to look like Zhang Chulan?

Zhang Chulan dares to wander around under the moon, do you?

When did Luffy eat an animal-type Devil Fruit? I'm speechless

Updates are few and slow, rewards are poor, and the protagonist is too weak. These are the main problems I think this book currently has.

Can you come here to build up the enthusiasm? The king of the team will be against the general. Don't keep watching until they are crushed. Let the audience know their special moves and so on. Zoro Sanji's skills are not shown at all.

I think all of you here have already done your best to forgive you. All of you here have a majestic appearance, blue sky and white sun, high mountains and long rivers, no ignorance of picking up gold, different customs, no bullying in dark rooms, no forgetting of ravines, good virtues, pure hearts, high mountains and beautiful scenery, high sentiments, high virtues, and meritorious deeds. Virtue is immeasurable, good gold and beautiful jade, bright virtue but sweetness, Huaijin holds Yu, Huixin is naughty, he sees danger and accepts orders, devotes himself to death, and is dead. Fine gold and good jade, respects the old and young, is old and virtuous, the predecessors planted trees, and the next generation enjoys the shade. The iron is clanking, the head is majestic, the sky is bathing in the sun, the prime of life, the romantic figure, the dragon and the phoenix chick, unparalleled, the unparalleled hero, the pretentious and unreliable, a branch in Guilin, the man of the crane, one of the best, unparalleled in the world, the title of the gold list, the jade in Kunshan, peerless, unparalleled, second to none, a generation of romance, a lifetime of dragon gate, proudly holding the head, outstanding among the mediocre. I keep my word, I am strict but not evil, I am prosperous and wealthy

You are already a mature author and you need to learn 100,000 words a day.

The author has reached a level where he can call himself nine thousand years old.