Da Qin: at the Beginning, the Buddha Jumps over the Wall and the Ancestral Dragon Cries.

What not to do depends on the system. Waste reborn or waste

In the anime, there are differences in hair color just for us to differentiate. In the comics, they are all uniformly pink.

I don't like the protagonist having a son when I read the novel. If he insists on having a son, he can accept it if he pays careful attention to some plots. I have to think clearly about whether he should do it or not in some plots. In the ancient historical novels I read in the past, I like to let the protagonist's wife take advantage of the male protagonist's son or vice versa. It's disgusting to read. Fei Lu has a strong possessiveness and mental mysophobia. Many people would not regard the son of the novelist as a son. At most, he is a special ordinary supporting character, far less important than the heroine and daughter.

I don't know what I'm writing. I've been writing intermittently. I've read about 40 chapters and I've basically skimmed them. I have no desire to read any more. The text has no passion, no ambiguity, and it's not a good read. I really don't know what it's about, and I can't even understand the plot.

The writing is too middle-of-the-road, always emphasizing how "beautiful" the male protagonist is, and he doesn't act like a normal person. All his actions are for the sake of serving cups. The sight of serving cups made me feel uncomfortable. I almost got goosebumps when the male protagonist said a word. There is also a lack of explanation of the cause and effect of the matter, and there are problems with the logic of language. It depends on how you write it, and it may seem awkward. You say that you are the boss of Hihe Company, and then you say something about the medicine of Weihua Cat Company. Is it a branch relationship between Weihua Cat and Hihe? Or did you write it wrong? I didn't see you explain it. In short, there are so many questions at the front that I can't bear them anymore, and I can't see the back, so I can only talk about them based on these contents. Another point is that Sino-Japanese relations are the epitome of Sino-US relations. It is not that Japan will gain advantages by being friendly to China, but that China has completely suppressed the United States and removed the influence of the United States on Japan and South Korea, so that Japan and South Korea can become its subordinates. The cause and effect is reversed.

You even killed Yin Man. I really thought that if you knew how to cook, the First Emperor would not kill you. How naive.

. . I really don't like this kind of plot, it's boring, but it's interesting to capture the girls.

Play a game and see who can beat you, even your gods. If you have time, if you work hard, if you have someone to teach you, and if you have someone to praise you, you are no worse than all well-known professional players.

I still don't want the emotions of these heroines to be mixed with other things. Otherwise, I hope the author can deal with the estrangement.

Is it ghostwritten? I've been writing for it for a long time. I stopped reading it after it was ghostwritten.

Are you mentally ill? A champion can defeat a mythical beast? A champion is not even worthy of holding a shoe for a mythical beast, but he can still win... Have you seen Elf? Can a bad guy like Fei Lu write novels now?

There is only one author. He didn't go to school.

There are very few updates and a lot of nonsense. Are you fair to us readers?

There seems to be no chili pepper in the Qin Dynasty, right?

Are you trying to tie up the harem? Crazy?

What the hell is that club like Universal? Why can you get into it if you are very popular or rich? Who established this? What if the world's superstars and the world's richest man can't recommend others, or can they enter by themselves?

Come on, author, these are my childhood memories. Although I hardly play them now, they are still good memories for me. When I went to my relatives' house to play, I saw children of the same age playing this game. I couldn't help but fall in love with this game. After returning home, I played the game in front of the computer day and night. I saw my favorite childhood memories written into novels. I was very happy and excited. I hope the author will stick to it and don't finish it. Come on.

Buddha came during the Western Han Dynasty, and Qin Dynasty already knew about Buddha.

I'm only interested in the cover. I guess there's something missing in my head. Some things can be found out just by looking up them. If you look at them this way, why does it feel like you're rubbing your IQ on the ground?

Are you going to take off or not? If you don't take off, you won't be able to take off! ! ! ! I keep talking about taking off, but I haven't seen you write about it! ! !

Let the system reward you with a book of exercises that Ling Ji can practice. You can't always let Ling Ji be an ordinary person, such as Mingyu Kung Fu, Xiao Wu Xiang Magic Kung Fu, Ling Bo Wei Bu, and some fire-attribute techniques such as illusions.

The protagonist doesn't have the arrogance to be an emperor, he's just like a loser

Send a woman as a gift, and watch Mao leave

You kid, that's interesting! Waiting for you to reach new heights

Some words should be kept simple if possible. If they are boring, they will be difficult to watch.

Nuwa was the one who created humans and became saints, and she is still in the Longhan Tribulation. Hongjun has not yet become saints, so there are still humans? ? ? ?

Chapter 12: Concubines compete for rewards in the book "Da Qin: The Buddha Jumps over the Wall at the Beginning, Weeping for the Ancestral Dragon" about drinking beer casually. Chapter review.

About the breathing turtle, "Man in the Dark Sun, Inheriting the Full Level Kuga Belt at the Beginning" Chapter 29: System releases mission, Xiaokui is attacked. Chapter review.

It's only 10 billion, and it doesn't have the essence of Fei Ludu. There must be at least ** trillion. It just so happens that all the money in the country belongs to you. Stinky. . .

Ahem, just kidding. I really can't survive writing traditional novels in Feilu.