Villain: After Stealing the Heroine, the Protagonist Breaks Down

There is a small point that many writers who write about villains have not noticed. In the original work, these heroines were all treated badly by the original owner. In the original work, I understand that there should be nothing wrong with another time and space, which means that in another world, according to the development of the plot, these heroines have already been possessed by others. Is this a kind of green or a bit offensive?

How much do you like stockings?

After pulling up the catalog, Yang Mi Reba was identified as a poisoner and left as soon as possible.

Did you earn this reward yourself? I just read the first and second chapters. The writing is true. The main character is written without any brains or opinions. Should I ask the system how to eat? The system asks you to eat. Do you want to eat? One second, he said that he was not afraid of dying once, and if he didn't accept it, he would do it. The next second, he said that the protagonist was afraid of death. Reading two chapters is the limit

I'm convinced, a heroine can only use small props to assassinate him, so why can't you get started? And your villain's various operations are comparable to Liu Xiahui, the Great Mother, the harem, and Lily tendencies. You are so good at writing, let's cut it.

I have seen many book friends complaining about the character of the protagonist. The author wants to portray the protagonist as a villain who is gentle on the surface but ruthless behind the scenes. In the early stage, he could only use various methods to trick Ye Chen because of his low cultivation level. Now that his cultivation level has improved, it has become much better. I will crush him all the way in the future. Thank you for your supportbr

I think that as a protagonist, he is not ruthless enough. He has to treat everything as an ant and everything can be exploited, but he also has tenderness towards the people around him, his own woman and his parents. You can refer to the book of Xiaowei Tiance. It is very well written. Of course, this is just my suggestion. The author can use it as a reference.

Finally, it's not an urban novel about soul-traveling. I really don't understand why those soul-traveling authors like other people's bodies so much?

For villain stories, it's better to be invincible, do whatever you want, and slowly grow up is boring.

It's this protagonist that makes people have no desire to watch anymore