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It's best if nc fans are dead, and they will be SB when they grow up

You said it's okay to call a creature his master, but why should he call him master? Have you watched too many Qing palace dramas?

If you don't drink Pangu's blood now, it's not pig's feet. I want to travel across the prehistoric times and speak directly to Pangu. Every time traveler appears from now on will drink a drop of your blood. What do you think Pangu would do?

Your guarantee letter is just like a joke, you slap yourself in the face. I have nothing to say about people like you.

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The plot is well written, but the male protagonist is too much of a nanny, always giving away things and always protecting others. To say it is a male protagonist, it is better to say it is a humanoid system. This main line has always been about delivering things and protecting people, and I can't even help you wash it.

I feel that in order to highlight the awesomeness of the protagonist or the original tokusatsu transformers, the other people are written too ****. Which one of those participating in the World Championship is not the only one in a million? At the beginning, it was said that there were some individuals who were not very strong, but in the end, they were still so weak after reaching the semi-finals. After all, they were selected among hundreds of millions of people. How could they be so weak, and even after reaching the semi-finals, who didn't have firm belief? Which one has not experienced hundreds of battles? But the author writes that anyone who encounters the famous weirdos from the original special series cannot beat them. Look at the latest one written by the author, he wouldn't write about ten people selected by billions of people around the world who can't even beat the hell brothers!

How can you write a novel without adding a live broadcast?

The protagonist of every super seminary novel likes to fall in love with Yan

Writing about Ren Yingying is not as good as the female version of Dongfang Invincible. I'm looking at a few pictures and I'll cut them if I keep them.

Diga has been a mess since the beginning, and where can Grandpa Tong go to philosophy? You can't grasp philosophy

I can write two chapters, but why do I keep writing? It's really pointless. I might as well write two more characters.

I didn't want to read any more when I saw the introduction, it was so exciting, haha! Such explosive novels are all about messing with civil servants, generals, and the founding emperor!

The background you made up is a high-level world that fights against the demon gods of the ten directions. This world is just a subordinate of one demon god. As a result, the top combat power of the forces in the high-level world is similar to that of this world. It is really funny. That's it?

Those heroines with ordinary worldviews such as Hiratsuka Shizuka, Futaba, and Harano have been written long ago. The worldview is so dangerous and messy. If you don't write it now, you will be able to survive for a minute later because you write without logic. The worldviews are added one by one. The heroines and supporting characters can obviously be included together, but they must be omitted. I didn't see why you were procrastinating on writing a romantic drama.

It's not good, time is chaotic, the bragging is really awesome, every realm is the ultimate realm of extremes, only one or two realms can be crossed in the end, just look at the front, I ordered a dozen chapters and ran away

You really have a lot of typos, and the protagonist's father changes over and over again.

I always felt that something was wrong there, and I didn't know what was wrong. Now I finally realized it. Why should martial arts with a modern background be written in semi-classical Chinese and follow the ancient style? It's really strange that this world background is written in semi-vernacular and semi-classical Chinese.

In that era. My parents died in the military. There is also a centenarian grandfather. Who dares to bully you? You shout on the street. The director of the sub-district office was dismissed

Is it a joke for the protagonist to travel through time? The main thing is that I don't know what I want, I don't know what I want, I don't practice cultivation, or I just want the system to give me something. Lottery. The protagonist doesn't know how to use his own resources. In exchange for inheritance? For example, novels plus this kind of inheritance. Or inheritance like dreams. Zhuang Zhou's Dream Butterfly takes Fei Lu as the theme, and the fantasy appears. False reality transforms belief into reality. Concept is respected. Will and heart. Beyond the other side. Come to another world to coexist with me.

The subject matter is good, but the author seems unable to grasp it

Why do I feel that the strength of the generals has been rising, from the great master to the king level, but I still can't figure it out. Is there a new level of generals coming later that I can mention? Obviously I have used the ultimate move in the front, can it be determined directly? If you want to use creation points to improve it later, it is no problem. I hate it so erratic.

Compared with other books with the same theme, the overall level of comedy is not as good, and the dialogue between characters is too dry. But judging from the results, it's not bad. It's better to persevere.

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Mao Lilan plays karate! Null! Hand! Road! Taekwondo is played by Xiao Xihachi.

I really want to complain about this card. I have to pay for the upgrade to the white card. . The cards I upgraded in the past were bought by my opponents and matched against me. .

Gesi wants you to help him py his new book, a comprehensive comic: Breaking the prison barrier at the beginning!

All I see is nonsense, and the more you read, the more boring it becomes.

Looking at the chaotic world of martial arts, I don't want to watch anymore, I feel dizzy.

I want to see Tsunade emmm