At the Beginning of the Fantasy Beast Species, I Led the Crew to Subvert the Top

My father, an eighth-grade worker, where is the family savings?

Just in case you can't see me, I posted a comment directly. In fact, this has nothing to do with the emperor novel. If you write a novel, you need to increase your salary. The premise is that when you write the novel, you should not set the identity of the protagonist to an ordinary person who breaks the iron. You should set his identity. According to your setting, he is the master of the three courts, the co-lord of the three realms, and the three masters of heaven, earth and people. Your best way to deal with it is to let him retain part of the original thinking of an ordinary person while having the treatment of an emperor, and then slowly let him rely on that image. Then why do some people say you are a loser? It's also because you didn't handle the golden cards you listed well. After you defeated the company with your first card, you should immediately attack the company. Why others say you are a loser is also because you did not choose to attack the company immediately afterwards. Company, but to go to Xianzhou. In fact, this is water in the eyes of many people, and you wrote too much about the pictures of Xianzhou, but in summary, you actually only did two things, but wrote too much. Your 66 is a typical example, and it is listed on the best shelves Chapters use most of the space to write other people's evaluations, and the following words are boring and meaningless. Moreover, according to your chapter division, they are all dealing with the fairy boat, but there is no battle in the middle, and there are no explosive points. This is why others say that you start to fail as soon as you put it on the shelves. So I say that when you go on the shelves, it is best to start declaring war on the company, but it is of no use to think about it now. The best thing you can do now is to conceive of the plot of the company, what is your main line promotion, and in what direction should you write it? In the end, your company actually didn't do well. You wrote the company's combat power too high. There are extra throne levels, and the company has stronger ones. You must know that Xianzhou's current great victory general Fei Xiao is just an envoy, and if you really count Xianzhou, there are only seven generals, but you gave the company After adding so much, your company is too strong and its combat power is a bit collapsed. Unless you strengthen other forces, and if the company really has the strength of Yang, the company's commercial invasion of Xianzhou will not be what it is now. Your company and other forces will be as they are now. From the perspective of the plot, it seems like there are a lot of mid-level ones. The gap is too big. Moreover, if you write about the company like this, you don't have to fear the Genius Club as much as in the original plot. You must know that the Genius Club is just a group of geniuses, not a group of envoys. Now the only two certain geniuses in the Genius Club are the envoys. The only ones who use it are the creators of Zendar Intellect and the Black Tower. If the company had such strength, most of them would have been captured by the Genius Club for study. After all, Intellect does not care about the life and death of the people in the club. It can be seen from the one in Pinoconi that after death, they are imprisoned in a dream.

The most annoying thing about all pirate fan fiction is that When both General and Garp are unable to defeat or even defeated, the bounty cannot reach 2 billion. Do you think this is the first time, so it must be at least 1 billion or more? A pirate group that just came out can't even retain two generals, so they can only give 210 million to make people laugh. Even if it's a promotion, it starts with at least 1 billion, right? I don't want to read it, but someone just said that I might be a eunuch, which is a waste of money.

The blue pheasant died in Chapter 185, is it alive again in the latest chapter?

It doesn't mean that you can rob and kill many ghosts, but that means your points will skyrocket.

This author's repeated provocations to the Navy and Whitebeard are to defeat without killing, defeat again without killing, defeat again without killing... This process is an infinite loop, infinite hydrology!

How to say it? If a military-themed content is all about training, it won't be long before it becomes commercially available. Who wants to watch training? You don't need to read the training to know what the content is. There are so many things that can be written, but if you don't write, will you be able to write about the evacuation of overseas Chinese? Can you write about fighting criminals? Can you write about the recent northern Myanmar? Isn't this more interesting than your training? Seeing now, there is no family background and no one at home? Why don't you celebrate with your family after being promoted twice? No vacation? Have you been in the military camp?

What can be written in one chapter has to take several chapters, which is too tedious.

There are too many Naruto characters. So far, less than half of the ones drawn are from Naruto. Will there be another Naruto next? There is no explanation of what period each character is from. Can it be assumed to be the strongest period? If it was the strongest period, that class should have a six-path mode, right? There is also Gojo Satoru's domain that has never been used. According to Gojo Satoru's domain settings, even if the generals are tied together, they will be killed, right? During this process, the target cannot react in any way and is directly disabled from elementalization. And Albedo, the one with world-class props or the one without world-class props, their combat power is very different. Does the author plan to finish writing One Piece and go straight to the finale, or does he plan to go to other worlds? After all, according to the current situation, Pirates probably won't be able to write for long, they are basically invincible.

The protagonist can't just become stronger. That kind of thing is of no benefit and cannot gain power. New abilities can only be gained through practice and gained new power, which can be continuously assigned and become stronger. This is the real good thing.

Please restore Lei Ting quickly.

If the author writes Date A Live, please include all the elves. Don't forget any of the elves. When did you write Date A Live? I saw Kurumi Tokisaki in the introduction.

You don't need to be ruthless, just don't be too holy. I really don't understand what Tina is thinking about the starting arrangement.

I'm just curious about how to write this Chaos. How good can I guess the level of a god's ability by myself without a reference?

The update speed is as fast as tj, readers are comfortable, and the author doesn't have to hold it in every day.

There is a bunch of words at the end of each chapter, it's so **

What the hell is written behind this?

What the hell did Minato Chaoyang write? Is it so powerful? I remember that he was not transformed into a crystal or something, and in the finale, he became Ultraman Grigio again in the movie version, and his fighting ability is not strong.

Bai can dress as a woman, but don't become a girl

I would like to ask the author if Lu Mingfei has a good ending.

What do you say about the swimming place? An old man said it before! Everyone likes to look at other people's women! You're still wearing a bikini! Very speechless! Then the plot is still about the underwear falling off! I wish others could see it! Cuckold plot?

Automatically subscribe, keep it for now! Reached chapter 200, read again

It's really not my fault that there are too many typos.

The introduction routine is so familiar and catchy

There is a big problem with the Demonic Chapter, and it is definitely the author's problem. It was promised at the beginning to retain the protagonist's abilities from the previous world. If I remember correctly, the previous world was Fairy Tail, but after reading more than ten chapters, the protagonist is too weak. Besides, even if you weaken it, it is too much, and you can't even use magic! I want to ask, how did such a weak protagonist survive to the end of Fairy Tail? Talking? I didn't realize that the protagonist can escape with his mouth. By the way, isn't this a cool article? Why do I feel more and more angry the more I watch it! The pirate chapter was okay, but every subsequent world tried its best to weaken the protagonist. If the worlds we experienced were all about high martial arts, I would have nothing to say, but this is not the case, it is unreasonable! ! Is the author tired of this? Feeling impatient with thinking and coding? If you are really tired and impatient, then don't do this in the first place! I can't bear it, it's my first time commenting, I feel good about myself

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