Live Your Life

The novel lacks forward momentum. I don't know why the protagonist must practice. First, the description of the background of the story is not deep enough. Although practice is generally a good thing, it can prolong life and get rid of mundane things, but there is a lack of description of the benefits. For example, in Dou Po, it is to revitalize the family and focus on it. Losing face, the second is that the portrayal of the protagonist is not three-dimensional enough, giving people no sense of substitution. The protagonist lacks character description, seems too calm and impersonal, and unlike novels such as Douluo, it is clearly stated at the beginning that he has traveled through time, so this calmness seems unreal. At the same time, there is also a lack of conflict. The story is driven by time rather than plot. It does not advance the story one conflict after another. Even in the end, when going to the fairy world, it does not reflect the disadvantages of not going to the fairy world. Unlike Dou Po, where there is a fierce conflict where the clan is killed or the body is killed, the article seems too dull.