Wuxia Storyteller: I Turn Down Yaoyue and Meet Lu Xueqi from the Start

The 4th level of Yuqing can control objects and fly, and the 8th to 9th levels can forcefully control thunder, which is the Divine Sword and Thunder Controlling True Art. The realm of Shangqing is on the same level as the nine-tailed demon fox Xiaobai, the thousand-year-old fox demon, and the water unicorn, yellow bird, and black snake. Even if Xue Qi's background is not as good as these divine beasts, how bad is the Nine Heavens Divine Weapon at hand? In the Zhuxian Taiqing realm, except for Zhang Xiaofan, the beast god and ghost king, the other highest level is Daoxuan touch threshold. Xueqi is at the upper and middle level of the Qing Dynasty, so he is arranged to be a grandmaster? Why don't you arrange for someone like Tian Boguang Yun Zhonghe to fight against Xue Qi for 300 rounds, and then use Qinggong to escape, so Xue Qi can't catch up while flying with her sword!!!

The title of your book starts with Xue Qi, but it turns out that it's almost 200 chapters, and Xue Qi doesn't appear a few times. In addition, although Zhu Xian can only be said to be a low-end immortal, at least there is a word for fairy. The author defines Tai Chi Xuan Qing Dao and Brahma Prajna as holy-level skills. , Not as good as the Sacred Heart Art and the Immortality Art. Are you underestimating the top skills in the world of immortals? Moreover, Xue Qi from the Shangqing Realm was summoned to the world of martial arts by you, and her strength directly became a master, not even a grand master. What is the meaning of this immortal cultivation?

Only in the realm of the upper Qing Dynasty can the Grandmaster reach perfection?

The 8th level of Yao Yueming's Jade Skill makes him a Grandmaster. Xueqi's Shangqing Realm and the Divine Sword and Thunder Control True Technique make him a perfect Grandmaster? Do you think that the thousands of years of perfection of the Tai Chi Xuan Qing Dao are bullshit? Yan Shisan's fourteen life-killing swords are perfect for the heavenly level. The three volumes of Tai Chi's Xuanqing Dao are divided into the lower, middle and upper levels. The martial arts are better than those who cultivate immortals. You are also a talent.

There are too many great masters. Even Song Yuanqiao and the newly debuted Ah Fei are actually great masters. Xue Qi is actually only halfway to becoming a Grandmaster, so the combat power setting is unreasonable.

Your failure is to balance the combat power. Your protagonist is playing the story-telling style, not growth and cultivation. He is directly invincible and has no impact at all. This wave of high-level realm boasts of being a grandmaster. The biggest failure makes an originally interesting book completely unreadable. It is a confusing operation.

You have lowered the power of cultivating immortals so much.

I don't know what the author is thinking. I only know that lowering the combat power of Zhu Xian to such a low level gives people the feeling that cultivators of immortality have cultivated themselves for hundreds of years. According to the author's writing, the entire Qingyun Sect has accumulated thousands of years of experience. Even if Daoxuan is the so-called grand master in the early stage, it would make people laugh to death if he just pulls in a Yakuza and can destroy the entire Qingyun Sect. How can he still cultivate immortality? Just call it health care.

You get dazed and excited at every turn, and you even talk about a book that makes you feel moved or moved by it. You are not one of them, right? You are just a well-known person, and the protagonist is not strong enough, right? You also predict the future, what if others don't do what you want? What about destruction? What to do? Or do you mean that the plot has to be the same as what you said before you write it? It's right to leave three points of leeway when talking about things, but not to leave any room for things when doing things!

I forgot about Xue Qi. I chased her because of my senior sister, but I have been hiding it until now. I am speechless, brothers.