
Martial Arts Storytelling: Refuse to Invite Yue and Start with Lu Xueqi
武侠说书:拒绝邀月,开局陆雪琪
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- Completed
- Length
- 500k Words
- Subgenre
- Traditional Wuxia
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Faloo
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The author of this book knows how to write cool articles, but in the end, he crazily suppresses the protagonist's strength in the book. And the explanation you gave me is a concept god cub again, right? Author, you know how to explain and how to be classic, and there are so many intrigues in the book, why not write business articles? Why are you writing this kind of thing? Oh, I understand that business writing requires more brains. The author is afraid that his CPU will be burned out and he can't stand it. Just like someone in the book review said that if you want to write something high-end and you can't write it, just stop writing it and start it again quickly. In the future, if someone wants to write something but can't write an interesting article, just like the author of this book explains, the main thing is a cub. The main thing about development is that the author himself has no brains. Anyway, didn't you know how to explain it before? Why don't you explain it now? Just bring out the theory of the cub. The cool articles in the past were simple and now the cool articles are complicated. My advice to the author is that if you don't know how to write, stop writing and hurry up and start again. Aligaduo, the author Sang has been a big help.
The title of your book starts with Xue Qi, but it turns out that it's almost 200 chapters, and Xue Qi doesn't appear a few times. In addition, although Zhu Xian can only be said to be a low-end immortal, at least there is a word for fairy. The author defines Tai Chi Xuan Qing Dao and Brahma Prajna as holy-level skills. , Not as good as the Sacred Heart Art and the Immortality Art. Are you underestimating the top skills in the world of immortals? Moreover, Xue Qi from the Shangqing Realm was summoned to the world of martial arts by you, and her strength directly became a master, not even a grand master. What is the meaning of this immortal cultivation?
Ninety-seven percent of them are mutated, plus the one who was bitten is a shitty person. Where is your brain?
Your failure is to balance the combat power. Your protagonist is playing the story-telling style, not growth and cultivation. He is directly invincible and has no impact at all. This wave of high-level realm boasts of being a grandmaster. The biggest failure makes an originally interesting book completely unreadable. It is a confusing operation.
Xue Qi, who has attained the level of Immortal Cultivation in the Upper Pure Realm, is actually the perfect Grandmaster. She has nothing to say.
In terms of balancing combat power, it should be similar to Zhang Sanfeng. In the future, everyone will not be a great master, so why should the protagonist practice the evil sword skills? It's faster.
The writing is too cryptic, and you can't tell what was done at all. . .
Seeing the world of cultivating immortals is not as complete as the world of cultivating martial arts.
1. Don't know how to hide your own cultivation. Either pretend to be a senior or become a junior. 2. Theory and physics must always be obeyed.
Don't know the main character of the plot?
There are many methods of the protagonist that are more powerful than Fifteen Swords. Why do you like to use this one? It's very possible that after playing Bewitched, you might like to seek death. Otherwise, how would you play if you were invincible with such a powerful system?
Personally, I think the original cover is better
No problem, there are all the transformation tattoos, and it's so easy to dress up as a woman.
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Ten years of life and death are so vast that I cannot forget them without thinking about them. Thousands of miles of lonely tomb, no place to speak of desolation. Even if we meet each other, we should not know each other, our faces are covered with dust and our temples are like frost. At night, I suddenly returned to my hometown with a deep dream. I was dressing up outside the small window. They looked at each other without words, only a thousand lines of tears. It is expected that the broken part of the intestines will be cut off every year, on a bright moonlit night, there will be short pines. The heart is bitter, I can't bear to look back, I can't regret it, and it's difficult to get along with me. The golden bell is clear and bloody, and it is always complained of infatuation throughout life. The bells are ringing, the flowers are singing, and the figures are getting thinner and their temples are like frost. Deep love is bitter, a lifetime is bitter, infatuation is only bitter for the sake of ruthlessness. The Nine Netherworld spirits, gods and demons in the heavens sacrifice my blood and body. In three lives and seven lives, I will fall into Yama forever, just for love, and I will not regret it even if I die.
Will this crazy bitch Yao Yue cry? I don't think Yao Yue will cry even if any female martial arts character cries⊙⊙
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The book is not bad, but the number of words, such as the lyrics, is a bit too high. We're not here to watch a song, okay?
As a finale, I'm definitely fine. Wash your hands in the golden basin.
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