National Fate: I Play General Huo, and My Teammate Is Boss Bai!
国运：扮演火将军，队友白老板！
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 396k Words
- Genre
- Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
150Chapters
2.9MReads
25.4kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 50
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You can tell, after Xu Chu came out for two chapters, no one knew that he was Xu Chu. Empty? Don't you have this piece of history?
The writing was too bland, and I didn't expect the guardian spirit to be so bland. None of the people in the live broadcast room could recognize who Xu Zhu was? When you hear the name Xu Zhu, you don't even know who it is? I don't even know what the point of you writing this paragraph is? In this case, if you write about other guardian spirits, the people in the live broadcast room won't know who they are, so what's the point in that?
No, shouldn't summoning the guardian spirit be the breaking point? Why do you write so plainly? How do you do it?
The highlight of the guardian spirit is the famous historical generals. If no one knows them, why should they watch them? Nothing →_→
In the parallel world, there is no Three Kingdoms. I don't know the Three Kingdoms. It lacks a lot of highlights, which makes the appearance of the guardian spirits too bland.
Dian Wei's weapon is a pair of halberds, not an axe.
If the guardian spirits of pig's feet are more than those in the original work, it would be best to add those from the Cao family, such as Cao Chun, Cao Xiu, Cao Zhen, and Cao Ren.
This fictitious history is boring. Summoning generals is not exciting at all.
Lu Bu among men, red rabbit among horses, Fang Tian draws a halberd, and stabs his adoptive father.
Pay attention to the details, and don't overdo the plot with too many barrages of the real world. It's boring to watch us, and your data won't be good. Just modify it appropriately to reflect the conflict and set it off.