
People Are in the Comprehensive Comic, Starting with Three Maids
人在综漫,开局三个女仆
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 4.2M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Stats
11.4MReads
414.8kFlowers
14.0 · 34.8kScore

人在综漫,开局三个女仆
After reading Chapter 285, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The author emphasized the coldness of the protagonist every few chapters, but there were several times where he got interested in her after meeting him for the first time. Are you slapping yourself in the face? Putting this aside, you don't really think that anyone would like a plot in which the protagonist shows off his inexplicable sense of superiority by ignoring some heroines he meets for the first time, do you? Some heroines have sex without even meeting each other, while others just ignore her and claim to be "not aggrieved and don't cater to others." It's embarrassing and embarrassing. The protagonist behaves like two people. Isn't the most important thing in writing a harem novel just to have equal love for each heroine? After fighting with Shiha Yukino Kyoko for almost 300 chapters without getting on base, you turn around and finish one chapter with another wife. Are you serious? In my opinion, when you write the male protagonist, he is not a young master who has a new life, but a childish elementary school student who pretends to be cool and doesn't even understand basic manners. I'm always thinking about what you do with your beta cold male god persona?
These two people feel a bit redundant among the protagonist's maids. They can't compare to Robert and Joel in terms of loyalty and combat power.
Go straight to whoever is supposed to be fucked, and they are all maids without licking. There are both mothers and daughters. There are many in each world. It's okay.
There are too many characters. I wonder if it's just random characters? It feels like it is relying on adding new people to maintain the book. It keeps adding characters without exploring them. There is nothing interesting about it.
Charlotte has silver hair? Why do you remember that you have pink hair?
Floating by, burning paper, lighting wax, adding incense, but no movement; pouring wine, paying tribute, setting off cannons, smashing monuments, but no response; digging graves, digging graves, opening coffins, whipping corpses, and losing temper; setting fires, burning corpses, filing bones, raising ashes, trying again, setting up tables, drawing talismans, performing martial arts, thundering, but no corpses; bells, wooden swords, villains, chanting incantations, and summoning spirits again; crying, crying, wailing, beating the ground? ... The author is dead, and the poor man is helpless! ! !
Many characters don't have pictures, and there's no sense of immersion at all. It's also confusing to watch. If you don't have pictures, every time a character you don't know appears, you have to use Baidu to find out what it looks like. I'm speechless. After all, no one can say that they have watched all the anime. There will always be many people who haven't watched it, which is very troublesome.
When the first maid saw blue hair, she thought of Marielle When the second maid saw the burly figure, she thought of the one in Masked Maid Guards The third maid, when she saw the red pupil earrings, thought of Phyllis Meowth When the third maid saw the black hair, she thought of Wugeng Liuli again . Why do I only think about old fans orz?
Can anyone who has watched it tell me if it's all included?
Would Jing Keai allow her students to do things like drag racing with her sports car? The male protagonist also asked her to call an ambulance and take some snacks.
Will all the female characters who appear in the book be included in the future? Or only take part of it?
What's going on with Ya Juyan and that slutty maid? She doesn't regard the male protagonist as her master at all. What kind of maid is she? Why does it feel like the protagonist only likes second-hand wives? Why doesn't he accept those girls who are still virgins?
Can you write a special book called "Love Home" instead of reading other books?
I don't know if the name has been changed, but I saw an identical one some time ago.
There is no doubt that Liu Chuang was a bad person in the early stage, but bad people are also human beings. They are not born. They are black just for the sake of being black.
How did it get published in Chapter 18?
Something's wrong, doesn't Black God like humans very much?
The protagonist is a boy who gives away money
Now I feel like I'm living in a prison. Today our community has locked both the front and back doors. No one is allowed to leave or enter.
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