Anime Crossover: My Dress-Up Darling Is My Junior From the Start

I can understand what animals say, cook, and kill fish. What if the fish says don't kill me?

Can Naruto's combat power be comparable to that of a demon high school? Don't talk about Naruto's explosive star. In a world where gods and demons coexist, the planet's resilience can already be created by all gods and demons.

The title of this book reminds me of an anime where the male protagonist picks up a doll. In the middle of the night, the doll grows in size and fights naked with the male protagonist. I am really envious when I see the male protagonist being tortured to the point of exhaustion.

There are too many characters appearing so far, none of them have a deep bond with the protagonist, and basically none of them can leave a deep impact.

Jianmei Xingmu's eyes were filled with the desire for electric welding. ]

The standard problem with comprehensive comics is that they are cluttered. Generally, 45 worlds are enough to write, but the author of this book basically wrote more than ten worlds, with too many characters appearing, and every time he transferred to the protagonist's class, more than 10 people were transferred to each class, and the power system was also messy. The second reward he received was Uchiha Madara's full strength, but after taking some kind of physical pill, he could only punch through a tree. What the hell? In short, when writing a comprehensive comic, you can't write a lot. It feels like there is no outline at all.

Now that I've written DXD, I hope to change the setting to include Gurlefiya.

I remember that ants communicate through movement and smell, right?

The female protagonist's evaluation of the male protagonist you wrote is too much and it takes up half of each chapter. You can reduce it appropriately or classify it and evaluate the male protagonist together.

It feels a bit stiff in many places, but if the author is a new author, it makes sense. I look forward to your next book.