Comprehensive Comic Editing: Ten Most Regrettable Scenes at the Beginning!

The name "Jiang Bai Demon Sword" cannot be criticized. It feels very confusing. It is difficult to imagine what kind of mental state the author is in to name a sword like this. The protagonist is called Wang Dali. Does it have to be called Wang Dali Demon Sword? Even if you want to name the magic sword after the protagonist, why don't you make the protagonist's name more stylish? For example, the protagonist can have a surname like You that is more suitable for the identity of the Demon Sword. The name Jiang Bai Demon Sword, I can only say this name haha, the author Xiaobai is outrageous.

I find that your idea of ​​writing a game novel is wrong. It does not mean that online games are bad, but stand-alone 3a must be fun. The sociability of games is also very important. Even when people say playing games, it depends on who you play with. Stand-alone games are excellent in all aspects. There are few online games that can compare in quality. However, I still find it boring to play alone every day. Stand-alone games can only be played occasionally.

This author obviously has good writing skills, but he still insists on giving you some poisonous characters such as the green villain. In fact, he knows it very well in his heart, but he just doesn't change, thinking that the readers are getting used to him, and in the end he writes one book after another.

Reading the introduction reminded me of Li Yalin, a tyrant in the fandom. He would make everyone blush and get emotional if he took off his glasses.

I thought it was seen by all the worlds, but it turned out to be just a few people

When a person has the enemy's life in his hands. Then the fact that he was executed by the hostile party was no longer innocent.

Dragon Ball Gohan fucked Cell when he was 7 years old, and Broly was born 1 week ago The birth ceiling of knowledge law

What is the power of the East? Please press the author on a stool to write articles every day!

Let's just say that in the era of warlord rule, you did not have military power. Aren't you meat on a felt board?

Such an awesome fairy has no character at all

The protagonist's hustle and bustle is really like being sold and praised for his licking. Before the system, he had his own opinions on everything he did. After having the system, he hurriedly gave gifts in order to increase his popularity.

It takes thousands of years to practice Taoism, but at first glance, the protagonist only has a few hundred years. This Taoist practice can actually evaporate out of thin air

Looking at the comments, it's about washing Obito and licking Ace again. Obito is a beast, let alone Ace, even if Luffy dies, I don't think it's a problem. How many pirates can one pirate release to save Ace? How many people do you have to harm? Ace punched five warships, didn't you see it? One out of ten marines may be bad, but among pirates, one out of ten is good.

I hope the author will carry forward the spirit of the minister

I want to see if I can win the Twilight War in Trisolaris.

The most regrettable thing in the anime is that Luffy's Marie is gone. I almost cried while watching it.

Does Tiandao still have this kind of rebate activity?

It can't be a scary voice that is mechanically indifferent to everything. It's just a criticism. It's not a criticism, it's an analysis of the mistakes in the previously posted videos. It's better to just take stock. It's really boring to have an invasion of alien gods or something! Not only the protagonist can post videos, but they can also post barrages to communicate. How come everyone can post videos? And also know what is happening in other worlds?

After that succubus came out, it was like a different person.

突然获得力量的屌丝，还是一个lsp，很难不扑街。

I think these lists are more beautiful than those about combat power. I hope the author will write more about this type of list, such as scheming, yandere, and how many male protagonists are in the harem, so that there will be less controversy.

I feel like the red police are useless. If we don't explode troops or get weapons, why do we need red police? The licking box didn't work either. It makes no difference whether there is a system or not.

Author, please add Alicia from Honkai Impact 3 to the chat, okay?

If someone comes and blows some wind, his left and right hands will be crippled. This thunder movie doesn't do that, right? Then you tell me that I can't get out of a space like Ishin Pure Land? Is Fei Lei Shen so shameless? Another complaint is that the protagonist has to play close combat. Damn it, an assassin has to play close combat.

Why does the inventory class not have re0?

This is a narration dialogue device

Thank you for your hard work, the last incense is added

It's very well written, but I didn't do this until after it was put on the shelves.

How obsessed are you with growing berries?

I'm crazy, why haven't you updated yet?