I, Silver Superman, Am Homelander

The writing is good, but don't look for some high-sounding reasons! It wasn't his fault that the Winter Soldier was controlled in the first place. If he wanted to take revenge, would he have to make himself superior?

On the first day, I am a superman, on the second day, I am a native of the motherland, and on the third day, I am a descendant of my ancestors.

There is too much nonsense, and the setting is not done well. The Silver Superman is really not too strong. He is not as powerful as you said, but he is still okay alone. It is like the Transformers starting from American comics. You can check out a batch of Silver Superman with strong settings. The Supreme Superman and the Thinking Superman are the real strong men. Even the Quantum Superman is better.

Just emphasize it once or twice, and the title of the book is also clearly stated. If you keep repeating it, it will be a bit confusing.

The character setting of the protagonist is very good, but there is no need to explain so many character ability settings. It seems very annoying. Who doesn't know whether the ability is strong or not, so there is no need to write so much nonsense. Come on, come on. Come on.

This sentence "I am the God of the World" is too awkward. I can be better.

It doesn't look very comfortable.

What a fool, he kills and kills endlessly, he has the same moral character as the Poison Man. That book's three views were distorted, but this one's strong point is still distorted.

This is not a person from the motherland, this is a person from our ancestors

Is such a protagonist really good? Of course, it's a good takeoff. Get up and update quickly, even the donkeys who give birth dare not rest like this