Attack the Dark Journey to the West at the Beginning and Create a Mythical Prehistoric Era.

Stop writing. You are really insulting the word Shinhwa Da Luo. It is really all kinds of things. **Novel

When I saw the first picture, there was a talent that "will never come out for a thousand years" and I felt a little uncomfortable with it.

The writing is good, but the protagonist's strength is weak.

First of all, Wuming was originally called Arcadia. Secondly, if one's name is taken away, it is impossible to say the original name. If you say it, it will become nameless. There are many details that the author should pay attention to, and some small details can make you go further.

Monsters are only suitable to be food, mounts, and pets.

Why should you separate it? It's not you, can't you make money by yourself?

Your choice is wrong. The Demon Sect should use heaven and earth to conquer the Yin and Yang Great Compassion.

First of all, the pace is too slow. A typical example is defeating the enemy with a few moves, which slows down the pace. The presence of the second protagonist is too strong. The fun part of this type of novel is telling those NPCs what we know. Third, promise me not to lick*, okay?

The combat power has not improved much. In a one-on-one battle, the water will increase the combat power. So if you love water, why don't you just write a book? Can you write it in Chinese in your code?

I've been watching for a long time. Are you telling me that Shen Youyu is not the first female lead? ? ? ? Is it really true that the first love in school days can't compete with someone from the sky? You told me that the girl who appeared in the description twice is the first girl? ? ? I mentioned my name twice during this period, so why did I suddenly become the first female? Where did you put me, Shen Xiaoyu?

No, what the hell is this? Why is it inexplicably not connected at all?

Well written, keep up the good work!

The first world was written so slowly. The rest of the world will be written more slowly. Please speed up the writing.

. . . Is it updated every two days now?

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