I, Immortal Li Changsheng, Was Exposed by the Gold List

Nine reincarnations, spanning millions of years, are really scary.

The heroines of harem novels are basically all created in the same mold. Basically, after reading the beginning, you can guess the strategy in the following. You don't even need to strategy. The heroine has already completed the strategy by herself. After watching too much, it becomes boring. There are too many female protagonists, too facial makeup and a hydrographic feel, so one or two female protagonists is best.

How could Reba's mother only miss her friends and relatives when she looked at the back in the photo? Can't you even recognize the people you've lived with? Even after 18 years, will it become unrecognizable? It's also too watery. It's about to become an ocean.

It's boring. It's really bad to copy the original plot and bring the protagonist into it. Just like the previous book, the protagonist can't do anything except oral sex.

If you change your marriage, the author should go to SF

It's been 8 chapters and I haven't slapped him in the face yet. I still want to see how Chen Kaige teaches his son.

The Uchiha clan was destroyed 2 years after Shisui's death. Come on, hehehehehe

There are quite a lot of tricks and the creativity is very good. But there are too many battle scenes, which makes me feel tired. Keep it first

Miku has already appeared, but then she was a Shido in her previous life?

I think it's a bit overwhelming for the protagonist. The power of Shazam alone is not what the Homelander and the hammer-wielding Thor can match. The protagonist also has telekinesis, black light virus and armed domineering. The protagonist is also adapted to the power of the power stone. Except for Black Flyloo, the X-Men and the Homelander can last one more second in front of the protagonist. It is disrespectful to these abilities. It is outrageous that you wrote that the Homelander can fight the protagonist back and forth for so long, and the protagonist has not developed the black light virus.

The other thing is to finish writing the lyrics, otherwise you won't be interested in watching them. To finish writing the lyrics, you can't miss a sentence.

Readers are tired of the author's prehistoric novels, which don't always follow the previous settings, and don't always want to write about heavenly conspiracies and so on. You can't write about how some authentic and humane saints were born, or how to improve the status of the prehistoric world.

When I saw the protagonist writing on the blackboard in the first chapter, I thought that the protagonist, who was a sophomore in high school, worked part-time as a teacher in the first grade of high school or junior high school in order to make money, and of course it was Shuchiin. Or they have already graduated from high school and become teachers for their schoolmates directly after graduating from high school in order to make money. By the way, isn't the first girl a girl from the other world? I thought that the love education of a bad woman like Kushida Kikyo, the shield child of Rise Enoshima, was given.

Why hasn't tnnd been updated yet?

You can't just put 50 chapters on the shelves and then not eat two meals. That would be so sweaty.

So far it seems ok, author, cheers

This book is very good. It is much better than some villains who sell their flesh in sheep's heads. At least one thing is that Ye Tian, ​​the son of destiny, is not brainless. This is how a protagonist should behave, rather than being incompetent and furious. It is very good. I support you, the author.

The sentences don't make sense, there are too many typos

That one is really good, but you only wrote a few chapters and then stopped writing it.

There should be a few confidantes and a descendant, so that there will be topics later and another descendant will be on the list.

The plot has already begun. When writing a novel, don't sacrifice the basics just to make up the word count.

With this update speed, I'd rather **

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