Three Years, Then Three More. Officer, I'm the Boss Now

Why did I feel a little frustrated at the end... It was basically a description of the protagonist being plotted by someone. Although it was okay, the reaction felt like incompetence and rage.

Can't you write something in vernacular? Don't you think it's cool to write like this?

The protagonist's system is called the club boss system. Why does the protagonist always want to quit the club? The protagonist is in trouble, but the protagonist wants to quit the club. It is not reasonable at all. Also, I feel that the protagonist system has not appeared in a long time.

If you don't speak Cantonese, just write it in Mandarin! I won't even make it up. As someone who speaks Cantonese, I don't know what you write as wild, banana, you are so old, it's like six or seven!

If you can't write well in Cantonese, don't write it. It's just futile and makes it uncomfortable to read.

Cantonese: Half a bucket of water has to be written in Cantonese, which makes it uncomfortable to read.

Can it be written in Mandarin? There is a dialect every few sentences, which is a bit hard to understand.

To tell a joke, in a society with 50,000 people, would a person who has gone from being a talker to a leader to have no territory? Any bar costs more than 700,000, and the total assets are only 700,000. They were mortgaged to borrow money from the villa to make a movie, and then the leader also acted in a role. Are you going to act in a movie as a club leader? MDZZ A faucet is not as good as a red stick. What a charlatan.

It's not a good idea to be a young and Dangerous boy who directly enters politics and takes control of one party even though he has a loyal heart!

If you write some Mandarin sentences and some vernacular sentences, you might as well just write the vernacular straight characters.