Villain: Reborn, Then the Heroine Chases Me

This is my first time writing a novel, everyone is welcome to give me suggestions.

Sweet tofu is the orthodoxy, salty is the heresy.

I originally read it because all the heroines in the past and present life like the protagonist. If you come up with Miss Zhao, the fiancée who likes Ye Tian, ​​what is the difference between reading other villain stories? There is a lj in a pile of CCs. What do you think? If Zhao also accepts it, it will not be fair to those who gave their first love to the male protagonist. Maybe it's because I have a glassy heart, it's like eating chocolate until I get drunk. If Zhao can betray Ye Tian, ​​why can't he betray the protagonist.

It's better to get rid of the original male protagonist quickly! I have read hundreds of books of this type. It's all about the original male protagonist jumping sideways over and over again, and he can't die no matter what. Then the whole book falls apart. Wasn't there a copy of it some time ago? It's obviously No. 1 On the Heavenly List. Lost by the author himself.

Belated affection is stronger than Caodu sword

Maybe it's because it's the author's first time writing an article. The writing style is a bit green, and the sense of substitution between Ms. Lin and the other female protagonists like Master is not very strong. When I say that, I think Ms. Lin's sense of substitution is really refreshing. It means that you ignored me before when I introduced the perspective of the male protagonist, but now I make it impossible for you to climb up, hahaha! But sometimes, as a player from a God's perspective, I feel sorry for Ms. Lin. After all, a tsundere who has never been in love is deceived into being like this by the people around her. You can also say that she has a temporary heartache. She feels sorry for her, but she will not forgive easily because she owes the male protagonist too much. Even though there are often passers-by in the middle, the sense of presence is only lower than Master or even higher...! After the two reconcile, it would be even better if they could reveal their tsundere nature in some small details! The characters are more fleshed out! In fact, Ms. Lin, I often substitute Youla

It's so well written, let's not talk about anything else, just this: In the synopsis, the character of the protagonist, Very real, like a person, This is what is called a major breakthrough. After all, many current villain novels, In describing the character of the protagonist, there are always many inhuman beings. It's puzzling to understand what he did.

I came to see the return of the God of War. My wife was holding one in her arms, and my daughter was holding a pair of boy twins with two hands.

Did your female protagonists sleep with the previous male protagonists before they were reincarnated? If you haven't slept with him, wouldn't it make sense for him to be the villain and the protagonist? If you've slept through it, it would be fun to be reborn with memories.

WOC looks at me and makes me feel physically and mentally comfortable.