Great Qin: The Immortal Ranking Is Revealed, and This Brat Is the Emperor's Grandson

Is the Qin Dynasty still coming to the Han Kingdom?

Author, your semi-classical language style is indeed okay, but it is not recommended for writing online novels, because it is difficult for people to directly understand the expression of intense emotions in classical Chinese (if your writing is particularly good, just think I didn't say it)

Don't always say "you ancients", it feels too dramatic.

So strong, it's actually classical Chinese

You have to work harder, there will be more people

Isn't Liu Bang the Red Sky Sword?

Commentary on Chapter 20 Zhao Lang's life experience, Master Niu's instant noodles, and the fragrance of Da Qin, written by Ximen Chui Deng, "Da Qin: Immortal List Revealed, This Naughty Child Is the Emperor's Grandson".

From the beginning, I have endured all kinds of jumps and jumps, but you, a Yue-traveler, can't find the First Emperor? You can figure it out even if you push it, right? Even if this is not considered, you still say that you are a modern person wearing yue. You are really teasing the readers as if they are idiots. And now that your identity is clear, what do you mean by those operations? Don't you even know what kind of thoughts can be used? Why don't you solve the immediate problem first and create a bunch of useless nonsense to make things worse? In the later stage, it was just nonsense until the end, and the character design was a complete mess. It was like watching a mentally retarded child playing house, which made me feel uncomfortable all over. The handling of details was also very problematic. What kind of tricks are you playing? Author, you continue to make up and continue to bullshit!

Chapter 66: "Da Qin: Immortal List Revealed, This Naughty Child Is the Emperor's Grandson" written by Ximen Chui Deng: Is he my grandson? (Please subscribe!) Chapter review.

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