Great Qin: I Can Grant Weapons Special Abilities

If it is lost and others can use it, it will be very uncomfortable if an enemy picks it up.

No matter what kind of online article you write, unless you are writing fictional history, you should at least have a general background to do research. It is not about nitpicking, but you should at least understand something. In the Qin Dynasty, you could use bronze instead of iron. The reason why the Qin Dynasty had high combat power was because their military discipline at that time was so strict that every head was exchanged for military merit. Therefore, I would like to advise most Internet article authors to write about alternate historical and alternative worlds if they feel that their writing skills are not very good and no one will criticize them.

There are always weak boys with physical problems in front of them. How does this contrast come from? Brbr Killed fifty assassins, no credit. . ? BrA life-saving grace, an opportunity to be a personal guard. . ? BrbrIncluding the conscription period, no matter how meritorious it is, is this how the old Qin people show their cohesion? BrThe opportunity to become a personal soldier, is this how Li Xin must accept the protagonist? It's not a combination of kindness and power, nor is it a mountain of military orders, let alone helping the protagonist win any merit rewards. . BrThere is still a lot to write in the follow-up, including the origin of the killer, the official response, and the conscripts were ambushed when they returned to the city. Li Xin is still a celebrity. Where is the source of the killer's information? Is Qin Baixu one of them? It couldn't have been an ambush just by chance. .

I think your ability halo covering the entire army is better than this golden finger.

Chapter 12 is so fake. I refuse to be an archer, but I still want to be an all-round soldier. I also want to recruit more than a dozen people to join the army, which is impossible now. Why don't you just ignore the ancient times? Your family started the army? Think through it before writing! Why not just write invincible? What a nonsense to write! What the hell, you deliberately wrote this in order to highlight the protagonist. It's no brainer. I can't see it. Are you using the back door to highlight the protagonist's good character?

Chapter 178: It's wrong for you to reward those soldiers. They were ordered by the king to protect your family. Naturally, it was the king who rewarded them, not you. This is called violating the taboo.

There are 150,000 people in a military camp, and they have been out for three days without anyone noticing? What you wrote is a bit exaggerated.

Can special weapons only be used by yourself? What's the point? Are you afraid that others will use it and hit you in turn? When writing a novel, you need to apply it flexibly. You can just set the right to use this weapon. Wouldn't it be better? What's the point of just using it alone?

Shoot 300 meters in the first battle, rifle? The second battle is only 700 meters, sniper rifle? Hit it a few more times and you'll be able to shoot the sun.

Are father and son brothers of the same generation? They are all called Chen Qianmou! If it is a compound surname, it should be called Yu, not Qianyu! Moreover, during the Qin Dynasty at the end of the Warring States Period, the capital of Guizhou had no surnames! Only clans have surnames! Moreover, there was a very taboo thing in ancient times, that is, people with the same surname should not intermarry! Since you belong to the same village and have the same surname, you are considered the same clan! People of the same race cannot intermarry! Moreover, people in ancient times were blessed when they had many children! Contraceptive facilities are inadequate! There certainly won't be just one child! During the Warring States Period, princesses were usually called Meng Yingwen, Yingtian Gui, etc. How could a Guizhou woman have a first and last name? This does not fit the historical background.