Wuxia: The Carefree Prince Picks Up Zhou Zhiruo from the Start

The result of the harem novel is that Xiao Longnu is someone else's, Wang Yuyan is someone else's, and Zhang Sanfeng is a great master. It's so speechless that a commander of Jin Yiwei can be at the same level as Zhang Sanfeng. Zhang Sanfeng's absolute combat power is the first in the low-level martial arts world. What kind of Jin Yiwei is worthy of being at the same level as Zhang Sanfeng?

Shouldn't Yuanying belong to the category of practicing Qi and transforming into a god? Can't even beat a Grandmaster? It stands to reason that Yuanying is at least a comparative god, right?

Can those who cultivate immortality be compared with those who practice martial arts? He also said how would Nascent Soul compare to a Grand Master or a Heavenly Being. Did the author embroider beans?

Try to make the protagonist as attractive as possible. Don't beat that one today and tease that one tomorrow. You have to know that you are a strong person, you have to have a strong mind and a strong charm. You have to write the protagonist as a moon worshipper. When I was watching TV, I felt that the villain was quite elegant. I didn't mediate it. What charm does your protagonist have? A clean protagonist is never bad.

Swallowing a golden elixir into my belly, my fate is up to me and not up to God. The golden elixir becomes a heavenly being, equivalent to an earthly deity. You Nascent Soul are fake, right?

I won't talk about the other flaws. Come on, author, can you explain what a wet sound is???

The character design must stand up, otherwise the character will fall apart and there will be no sense of immersion no matter how well written it is. . The first few dozen chapters gave me an elegant and casual feeling of being a cultivator, and when I encountered Feng Qingyang, I suddenly became a junior. It even feels like I'm on the verge of defeating myself. . If you put it this way, aren't the two elders Xuan Ming also seniors? Why are they treated differently? Didn't grasp the scale well. . This persona must be established. Isn't cultivating an immortal just about looking at the character of an immortal and pretending to be fresh and refined? Don't ruin the character when you encounter a character that the author admires. .

It turns out that the grandmaster is already the master of a sect, not to mention that it is rare to see a great master, and there are less than twenty on the list. Unexpectedly, the great master suddenly walked around and the gods were not as good as Gou. This fantasy cultivation rhythm.

He Zudao is already a god, and Zhang Sanfeng is only a first-class grandmaster... This is the only one among all the martial arts novels I have read that Zhang Sanfeng cannot defeat He Zudao.

Yuanying can't defeat the Grand Master and the Earthly Immortal? This Nascent Soul is a bit watery.